THE VIKING OF THE NORTH

hello guys this is my first try and also first time writting a novel of my own so it would be rough to read and imagine what I am trying to say with my current level. but I am going to try my best to give you a story I am thinking to write. I will try my best in every chapter to give you an good impression and show my improvement. I have never read a book like hp , got etc.. I am just trying to give you what I am thinking. I hope you guys would like it and give support to me.

Now to the synopsis,
it's year 2030 where the game named "STORM" have been launched its a VR game and people's had been going crazy about this game because it's the first realistic VR game have launched in the year 2035 the guilt named "PRIDE" tried to monopolies the game but results in creation several other guilts. But also the major no. of people had been joined the PRIDE guilt which results in placing the guilt at the top.
And they are my mortal enemy since my brother had been died because of them so that I am planning annhiliating the guilt to ash's.