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The Unbeatable Maniac
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Zed Zabinski is from a wealthy family that lives his life with no worries until his father comparing himself to the descendant of other families.
Zed is obsessed with the so-called spartan, he thinks spartan is the most elite soldier in history. Because of so he only works on his body, not his magic, many call himself a maniac because of how much he likes spartan figure.
In a world where magic and warrior exist Zed who lives his carefree life is left behind by others who work hard to become the pinnacle of power. His father constantly giving Zed a disappointed look. Zed swears to himself to become the pinnacle! the best of the best warriors in the whole world who stands above everything to prove to his father that he is not a disappointing son and prove to the world that spartan ways of doing things are the best way to be the most elite soldier.
When the day he does his usual exercise and trying to get his PR on his bench press like equipment, the weight fall. When the bar is a few cm from crushing his neck the world stop and a box-shaped hologram appear in front of him saying " Zed Zabinski accept and get all the power you need or reject and die here with regrets"
Little did Zed know that his life will completely change after that.
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Big Thanks for Malik Maulana for the cover he created for this novel.
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Your story is amazing but your mc needs more character growth he is to soft on his enemies Spartans are supposed to be brutal and kill their enemies or die trying he literally runs away like a girl at the bath house and there was no reason to help the girl honestly your mc is acting like a child and it isn't relatable I will change my review after a huge growth in maturity also please don't drop It I honestly am just trying to give you honest feedback I hope you understand my criticism
I was a bit sceptical about this novel in the first couple of chapters but this novel has become one of my favourites the character and world development is quite flushed out and in depth its just an all around amazing novel Author i love it keep up the great work
Qualité d'écriture merdique.Un plot romantique forcé. Un contexte mondiale superficielle.et des personnage plus stupide les un que les autres. Je déconseille fortement de lire ce livre.
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I like the fact that in the beginning, the grammar wasn’t good but as time passed the grammar got better. Unlike other authors who proclaim that English is not their first language or some sht and does not in anyway try to improve. Your effort in being better at english is very good and i like that.😇🙂