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Philip had an ambitious dream of turning the world upside down and having his name recorded in the history books but before he could take the first step towards his dream, he died and got reincarnated to a world of swords and magic. He found out that he had an affinity to spatial magic.
Author's note:
-MC will be powerful but not a one man army.
-MC's Masked Phantom persona fighting style is inspired from the Fourth Hokage of Naruto
-Other characters will have their time to shine
-MC has a rival, yes
-Character developments are present
-Interested in Pokemon fanfics? Do check out my other work, Pokemon: The Steel Tyrant
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By reading from the first chapter, it was really good and I can see the characters background from the mc and some of the characters. So far, I didn't find any grammar mistakes so that's a bonus. Keep it up👍🏻
Writing quality is good while updates are stable. The flow of the story is going in an excellent direction. I'm getting a few naruto vibes and it's going well. As for the characters, the MC is good but a bit is lacking in the thought process, which can still be fixed. As for other characters, I love how the author pays attention to character development. World background is slowly being explained. Overall, it's a good read
The book is great especially the first few chapters, the world background is cool and the characters are cool too. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Good job author
Interesting story and characters and world background are well described and good plot and writing quality is also good and keep releasing new chapters
Always a fan of reincarnation type story because it gives me a lots of rolarcoaster type of vibes which l can find in this stiry as well... The writting quality is good as tge story background.... The author has did a very great job creating such a nice story... recommend to everyone... It won't bore you..
Enjoyable read and fluid writing style. I actually love the world building and the concept of sealing magic and the way the mc uses his spatial powers in such a setting just seems really cool to me somehow. Again, your interpretation of sealing magic really flashed me. The pacing is pretty good and the dialogue doesn’t feel forced,
Yes, a little over the nose with the naruto and ninjutsu comparisons but the author doesn't fail to add his own touch and create a unique world. As for his writing style and descriptions; They're superb to say the least. My only qualms so far are with the MC rick. His mischievous is amusing but he lacks his own thoughts and reasoning but which could change in the future since the novel has only started.
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So reading this, I will definitely say it was a fun and engaging read. The plot is straightforward and simple, with the pacing nice and not too fast. The characters themselves are engaging to follow and their interactions are nice. Criticism wise, I guess I could say that maybe the overall grammar and syntax could be better, but that in my opinion is largely superficial and can be rectified. In short great story which I would highly recommend.
Right from the start, it gets me the "naruto" feelings, but it is still original enough with its balance magic system. The main character does feel quite overpowering a bit. There are a few minor grammar errors when you look at it, but the narrative is straightforward. I would recommend you go further than chapter 5 for an enjoyable experience. 7/10
Apart from a few grammar mistakes, the novel itself is interesting, and the new elements that weren't expected are a treat. From the history to the magic in it. You have GOT to read this!
My review is based on the first three chapters. To me, the storyline progression moved at a moderate pace. World building was decent. I liked the author's writing style and it was a fun read. Give it a try[img=update]
Read half the chapters, so basically 4 of them. from the first chapter, i was getting major naruto vibes, the whole hidden sealed village and all that. then the other 2 characters were shown and i was like, “ok, a pink haired girl and a boy with spikey black hair, hmmm”. i just hope you give them enough personality to make them shine as individuals. There has been some hinting towards the ML acting older than he already s, but no explanation of why or how. i feel Like that shouldve been added within the first 4 chapters but alas. Your use of english is simple with no grammar mistakes i could point out. But there were times where i noticed the sentences being longer than necessary. If you play your cards right, you could have a pretty good story, good job. keep writing ✍️
Lovely writing, something hard to find nowadays. Great start and an excellent world-building for what I saw. Though, I would spend a couple more words on the synopsis. Keep up the good stuff :)
This story is very well written! I love how the situation is portrayed, and the feelings of the main character are also very well narrated! Nice job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a thrilling book. The first chapter is hypnotic. I couldn't stop laughing as the author captured some hilarious scene. The writing quality is impeccable. Great job author. I can't wait to see how the ML turns out👍👍👍👍💯💯💯
The writing quality is top-notch. Frequent update, so like it. The story is still in its baby state so I won't say much about it, I will just say it is going well. The character design is okay, my imagination can pick up how every character and beast would look. I say this every time but I am a huge sucker for world-building and the author is doing great at it. I don't know if any body said this but I believe in this motto I made- "Your characters are alive when your world feels alive."
I think the overall plot idea is great. It's too cliché and the writing pace is reader-friendly. It's Rick that I think needs more work on his character. I had no problems with the world background description so is the story development but Rick's thoughts are not expressed properly. I still can't tell exactly what kind of person he is. He seems smart and at times mischievous but those are the only observable traits. Why he wanted to do some certain things or hide some things in the first two chapters aren't very clear.
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Author's review here with the mandatory perfect score review Here's what to expect: 1. Romance, yes there will be romance but no harem 2. OP MC? Not really, but strong. 3. Character developments are welcome 4. MC has two personas, The Masked Phantom and his regular self for safety reasons 5. Update schedule: 1 chapter daily 6. No Systems