The raging True Dragon... Dead.

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GodOfDogs

1. The grammar in this is terrible it is hard to read at some points and just doesn’t make sense. Same with the spelling errors there are several per chapter I suggest using grammarly 2.The power levels of this are completley messed up Guy Crikson is said to have around 40 million ep when the mc has 150 million. Also the mc has countless ultimate skills while guy only has a couple and then the mc tells guy that he can easily kill him which makes no sense because if your going byogic mc is many times stronger than Guy 3. The random gender change in the middle of it this one is annoying and can be fixed by going into previous chapters and changing the hes to she’s 4.Some time the story makes absolutely no since they will be doing something and then the next second they will be doing something else with no explanation you need to explain stuff more so that the reader actually knows what is happening and the writing is just all over the place.

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara

It was a great idea a water true dragon but honestly this was a case of absolute terrible execution but I do have hope for the authors future Fanfics just not this one.

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DaoistsLWnnQ

I love myself and all you haters can hate me all you want but I still love myself and none of you makes me happy😘😘

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Robert_Thompson97

Such a good idea to have a new true dragon and I loved the character design but the grammer was horrible and made it difficult to read! Also like 5 chapters in he already has 129 million EP value? Thats riddiculous Veldora has the highest ep for a dragon and he was only at like 100! All in all its a good idea but I would suggest rewriting and taking more time to set up a foundation