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The Phoenix of Fairytail
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A man was reborn in the world of Fairy Tail with the powers of Marco from One Piece. Read as he uses his knowledge and abilities to survive in this world and keep his family safe.
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SUBARSHIII!!!!! Hope you keep going, and update more. Should be intersting to have him feel and try to manipulate mana inside himself, to train control and all, maybe the whole 'compress e let go' thing to grow his amounts of mana. Honestly i would like very much if the romance were to be with Juvia(ie. best girl) since he had problems with his past relationship, a new one with a very loving girl(pseudo-yandere) like Juvia might be interesting to work with from the insert POV.
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆ but I will give 5star ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - a good buildup, adding realistic aspect to the story well done. - to the readers that can't even handle blood, violence and torture you guys can just go away. find a wish fulfillment kind of ff. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - Physical design good - Personality good - power and abilities good ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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Overall good story, no grammar issues either. The dialogue is good and so is the description and world building. The updating stability could be a lot better, as it's pretty inconsistent, but it's fine.
First ever review, really enjoying the story so far hope it continues. Should be interesting. Hope it updates. Random comment. Random comment. Random comment. Random comment.
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good history