THE_LOST

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OSM_1015

Heyyah! I would like to say that the author has put quite an effort to create a very awesome world background which is convenient to the readers to take in the visual imagery of it. But what made me want to say is that, it is better that the author takes a concern of the punctual marks as it is quite a lot important when it comes to reading and hope the author would take it in concern. Waiting for a constant update dear author. Not to forget I love the way the story plotting is. Keep up the good work dear author❣️

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DurojaiyeAdedayo

This is not the type of genre I normally read. But I must say this is good. The writing is exquisite. I wasn't able to spot too much grammar errors. another thing that I noticed is the creativity that was out into the book, like how did the author even come up with this story.

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babydragon25

The novel is nice but the writer needs to work on updating his book. The plot has been amazing so far and the MC has been amazing. There were also some grammatical errors in some chapters but aside from that, the novel is a hit

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PEARL_WANG

Well good! i don't what to say about MC i am speechless and stunned. the wordings are good. keep working hard all i can say and suggest you to do a little research..then u will be good to go...

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RazorReptile

I read chapter one and I do have a few critiques but its just on writing. When you're using parenthesis like this: he said " No" it should actually be he said "No." with the parenthesis touching the first letter and the correct punctuation in the parenthesis. Besides that you should get grammarly and just copy and paste ur chapter from over there to inkstone that way you can avoid a lot of mistakes. Every top writer uses some form of grammarly or writing checker.