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the frozen slayer

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A re-boot of the adventures of sapphire, are protagonist gets reincarnated into a fantasy world with a system but choose to change there gender, will this change anything, also they are a kitsune.

are protagonist will go though some rough patches but will gain an ability/s that allow the to travel to other worlds what will they do there when or if they reach the different worlds lets see how they fair shall we.

John, also knows as Jack is are second protegonist, he was invited to join Sapphpire/mc in the same world as a request from mc, jack accepts this, but becusse of bad luck something happens, so the two friend are unable to reunite when intended. what will jack do, what can he do lets find out.



ps i’m not very good at writing, I do this for fun so hopefully some people can enjoy what I write even if it's hard to read sometime.

if you have any idea’s that you might think will be good to use then please suggest them, i’m sadly not very creative most of the time.

please give this a read and tell me what I can do to improve it, I know I’ve got a lot to improve but hopefully it give you a laugh sometimes.

have a great day/night see you in the next chapter or in the comments of other novels *\(^o^)/*

ps Got ai art for the photo now, hope it's decent enough :D

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Sup, the author here, so I know I need a lot of improvement but becuase it apparently mandatory I need to give it 5 stars, even though I decently no it’s not, well not yet. Thank you for reading this and if possible I would appreciate a comment or two just saying what could be improved or what’s good, or even what you lot would like to see. Have a great day/ night *\(^o^)/*

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