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The Frontier
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The Galaxy is only a small drop amongst the vast universe with many undiscovered oddities that can not be described. Humanity has accomplished many achievements to further their understanding of the universe though miniscule. But what lays beyond those of our knowledge is just the frontier of all things. Follow the journey of a young man with a mystified past as he ventures into the frontier as many others had as well.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: WQ- could be better, keep working on it.;,;. SoU- no complaints here.;,;. SD- What story development, I mean, there is a little bit, but it is mostly an information dump... CD- well, you have given the MC a lot of design, but lack when it comes to other characters, they almost don't exist... WB- did it with an information dump, but definitely covered it fully.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good job on your world background and keeping your story updated at a constant pace... you told your readers before hiatus too, so good on you.;,;. Personal Feedback: I think this is a decent foundation to a story, but it would have been if you wrote all of this information down near the beginning for yourself, and slowly explained it through the story.;,;. I apologize, but I will not be continuing your story... for the sake of those who enjoy it, I hope you continue until it is finished.;,;. Scores: WQ 4/5 SoU 5/5 SD 1/5 CD 3/5 WB 5/5 total 3.6/5
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Shameless Author #2198 reporting for duty. Nevermind If I were to rate my novel. Writing Quality - 3/5, slowly changing to a 4/5 as my literary skills improve. Story Development - 4/5 The beginning is quite slow, but it'll generally speed up as time goes on. Character Design - 4/5. Characters aren't really one dimensional, but some are just made on the spot and left by the dust as one of the MC's acquaintances. Some will appear in different instances of the novel. World Background - 5/5. The only thing I believe I did well on, not including the block of texts in the history chapter. (Don't read it unless you like that type of stuff.). The Frontier is the boundary of discovery and improvement. Follow the story as you see the progression of the MC and the improvement of my literary devices as times go on.