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The only game in my life that makes me laugh: The Lands of The Lunerra... I played this game for six thousand hours in three years, and the day I thought I had done everything I could in this game, I felt a great emptiness inside me. I thought nothing in my ordinary and monotonous life could make me happier than when I played this game. But it didn't take long for me to realize that I was wrong with an e-mail I received the night I finished the game.
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Hi! Thank you to everyone who came to read this story. There are two things I want to tell you.
First of all, I first started writing this about two years ago, but I was writing in my native language, Turkish, and on a different site. But unfortunately, the website where I published the series came to the brink of collapse. While I was thinking about where to publish the series, I remembered Webnovel and here I am. So this is my first English novel and I believe I will make mistakes while translating. Please forgive me for these if you encounter some of them. I will do my best.
Second... yes, while writing this novel I was inspired by most of the novels I've read so far. Like TNE, that novel is a pure diamond for me and I don't think I will ever reach the level of that thing. So I want to say the first few chapters may feel familiar to you, but I'll do my best to smooth it out.
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until now(ch30) I'm enjoying this novel .Very good writing skills,the characters seems to have a story of their own,good plot and most importantly no-harem.The only thing bothering me is that the mc is not gloomy or a crazy or cynical or broken. Anyway what I mean is he needs to suffer more.And that relationship with his sister is too exaggerated. I particularly liked the part about theories of mana as a sorcerer myself so imma waiting for more theories and battle.i also hope for a good romance with a cute tsundere if possible. I recommend this novel to everyone with good tastes
After about two months of searching, I finally found one more novel that I can confidently say I'll be waiting for in agony for each and every chapter after finishing the previous one. First off is writing quality, which I give 4 stars. It's pretty obvious why, with it being a direct translation of the author's Turkish version of the story, and you can see that, although the spelling is absolutely perfect, the grammar is weird in some parts and just wrong in some other parts, but these mistakes are isolated to one or two per chapter, and so it doesn't really affect the reading flow, hence the 4 stars. Secondly is the stability of updates which I obviously gave 5 stars. Pretty self-explanatory if you look at the update rate. Thirdly is the story development, which I had to give 3 stars. It was either I gave this 3 stars or the character design three stars, but I eventually decided on this. This is solely because of the development of the relationships between the MC and the supporting cast. It feels horribly forced, cringy, and even just "skip the entire chapter" material at times. I actually almost dropped this novel when I read the chapter when the MC talks to his "sister" for the first time, cause it was in the first few chapters of the story, was actually over the phone through text whilst still managing to be extremely cringy, and I truly thought that the rest of the novel would be just as trashy once I read that interaction. The development of the relationship between the MC and the MC of the game he transmigrated into was even worse. Here's the "but" that all y'all have been waiting for though: the start of the relationships might have been utter trash, but the developments afterward truly feel real, and made me feel emotional at times. And so, if you can get past the start of the relationships (I just completely erased them from my mind at this point and inserted generic plot development) you'll be in for a real treat I believe, as you'll actually be emotionally invested in these characters at some point. The rest of the actual story development was pretty good, with nothing special about it, but nothing bad about it either, so yeah, that's my spiel on the story development. Now, onto the character design, which I gave 4 stars. It's pretty generic to be honest, like the actual story development, there really doesn't seem to be anything new or truly mindblowing. All the characters have believable backgrounds, and some backgrounds are still shrouded in mystery. Although, one thing, because of one's investment in the character after one point, and how the author has created situations in which the MC has interacted with all female characters to a certain extent, there will probably be pretty strong opinions in the future when one FL pulls ahead of the others. So, unless this novel will include a harem (which I am not advocating for in any way cause I am strictly in the no harem gang), there will inevitably be some mad people when one heroine eventually wins. Finally, there's the world background, which once again, is pretty generic, with nothing special about it, and so it's another 4 stars. The synopsis is all you need in order to be able to guess the entirety of the world's background and power system, as long as you've read other novels within this genre of course. Overall, the story scratched the itch I had for another story where the MC knows the future, kinda, and so that's why it'll be one of the novels I'll be closely following. It's a great novel, and, as long as the story follows that path that it's been trudging on right now, then I truly believe that it'll be something special on this platform ("special" meaning not a trashy harem, lust fulfillment novel for virgin, middle-aged men). Keep it up author, you're doing a great job with this novel!
Abysmal MC. You finish a game and what, want to leave the world because, post-game clarity? At the starting point of life yet already saying he doesn't want to be an ordinary person. Boi is 21 years old. Too much tictok influence making these young adults delusional. Bro is depressed becuase he grew up in an orphanage and has no "real" friends. If he played 1 mmorpg, im sure he would have many friends considering how long he can play this 1 game for. Thats just chapter 1. By the end of Chapter 4 he is like; I'm in the game world. I took over the body of a guy who just died by committing 'that'. But now I can have a new chance of life. Also gonna get emotional because we have that 'original body is emotional for family stuff' baggage. He complains about fake friends and relationships in chap 1 yet is ready to exploit relationships and secrets in the game world, his new chance. Literally he just wants everything handed to him. Now another crazy plot point without spoiling anything. MC will get a special item, crazy for a game world isekai. What is particularly remarkable is a few lines introducing it: "We researched it for a long time, but in the end, we realized that no matter what we did, we wouldn't get anything out of it. "..."Obviously, everyone was hesitant. Because this was an illegal place connected to the black market. So no one doubted that they had tried literally 'everything' they could try on that stone. " I was thinking, surely they did THAT. But then the MC does THAT. The novel is a joke. Its not a matter of cliches. Its the way they are presented. Truck-kun works for a reason. Blank screen works for a reason. Trying to write a good reason for leaving the world works if you can write a character/backstory. The force feeding of emotions is heinous. Like a game making the player kill a regular normal small puppy for no reason. Its just there and you have to kill because author wants to artificially create emotions or substance to inflate the novel's ideology. I'm still reading a bit more, seeing if things get better. I held off on writting stuff despite how atrocious the start was. easily 0/10 stuff. I had to write something after reading about Mc doing THAT. Just realized this was the entirety of volume 1. What a great start. Deleting my 2 min older post.
Nice story building. A little unique story line as it is in the starting phase need more chapter to analysis. So Quickly try to[img=recommend]update more chapters [img=recommend] 🙏
dont waste ur time on this.too many plot holes. mc is braindead 0 character development. forced plots ngl.if u want to read something with ur brain off this is ur cup of tea enjoy.
The story start off interesting but I gave up after 100. The author just straight up just start torturing the characters. It just one awful thing after another. The author literally straight up tortures one of the main characters till they end up mental patient. The mc seem to have no growth even past chapter 100 and he just spend most of his time having one mental breakdown after another. He know so much about the game but seem to become dumb. Like he has a extremely powerful ability he can’t control because of split personality and from the get go I trying to figure out why he don’t get the good version of the power to balance hisself out. There should be at least on person in the world that could help him try to control his issues but he just has break down after breakdown. I never understood authors that just love to straight up torture all the characters, like it just awful to read and would think it would be mentally unhealthy to constantly white stuff like that.
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Completely read through a Novel's extra and this has a lot of the same shortfalls that one did, namely an overly complicated plot device that kills his emotions. The world is interesting enough but instead on focusing on the interesting parts of it, the author decided to focus entirely on making this a clone of the Original except less interesting
I love novels with themes of reincarnation into a novel/game. It's sort of my guilty pleasure. That said, there are too many of them out there that just don't cut it for me. They either have harem, bad plot, poor writing, bad world-building which prevents me from enjoying them. There are very few novels that checks all of my boxes and I am very glad that this is one of them. Nuff said. Writing consistently and releasing chapters daily is not easy, so please take good care of yourself. Thank you for your hard work, Windsky.
Alright, so I've randomly come across this novel and my review might be biased since I'm an extra novel fan and author myself but i gotta say, its been a great read.There are some issues with grammer here and there, awkward interactions at the beginning, but this didn't hinder my reading experience so I simply don't understand why it hasn't been popping off, cuz its good, way better than the other blatant rip offs out there. Anyways, keep up the good work author, grear job.[img=recommend]
This novel is one of the novels i highly regard with respect, this novel will get full 5 star review especially the updating stability and the story development.
I wanted to wait a hundred chapters before writing a review, but whatever—this latest chapter (69) changed my mind. Even though this novel is a pretty generic genre, it is among what I consider the upper crust of its kin because the author takes time to flesh out the characters, set up events and build anticipation. IMO, the character design is the best part. Nothing that shouldn't be rushed is rushed, such as relationships. The character interactions and their internal thoughts are one of my favourite things about this novel, as well as the excellent writing quality. The only complaint I have is when POV switches to side characters but remains in 1st person without labelling whose POV it is. That took me a long time to get used to. Anyway, the initial chapters of mc's transmigration follow a tried-and-true pattern, but after pushing through them (which neither takes forever nor too quickly, keep up the good pacing) the story starts to blossom and set itself apart from others. MC makes some questionable yet understandable decisions which leads to character development and future conflict points. There is also sufficient foreshadowing and pleasant world-building which spices things up. The mental arc that MC is currently going through is very interesting, and I look forward to the potential paths in his future. There is also no shying away from emphasizing his internal conflict, which makes it all the more realistic and evokes empathy/sympathy. I won't spoil too much, but even though negative emotions aren't that easy to push to the back-burner, they aren't always the point of focus either. Even though I don't know what awaits in the future, I'm definitely staying for the characters because they are what makes me anticipate a new chapter every day (also author, when will the romance start?) :).
**Mini Spoiler* Honestly, this novel is quite good, it shows that the author has been slightly inspired by other novels such as TNE or the author's point of view (and some novels that I don't even remember) and I like that, the protagonist is quite good (except for the combination of his ability and his "personality disorders" and downturns that sometimes make him heavy) his growth is fast but not too fast and it is seen that at any moment he can be killed (realistic), one thing that stands out is that the mc He has knowledge of everything but the author does not abuse it by explaining future events or making mc stronger by taking advantage of that. The secondary characters are well done except for the protagonist of the game, you could say that he lacks a little aggressiveness or something like that. One thing that bothers me slightly is that when the MC is about to die the purple thing always has to appear (I don't know how to say it) to "save" him, the author should make him save himself from death in other ways and thus avoid be repetitive. Well this is my constructive criticism (I did it with the google translator so it is possible that some things are misunderstood) PS: Author, do not make the same ending as in TNE, I beg you, the ending was mediocre.
I have been reading the series since it was published in the original language and I am proud to be an old reader! I like that the novel gives us more than one pov and tells the story of more than one character, and that you don't have to stick to one character. Even though it's obvious how some of the events will turn out, it gives you more than enough content to keep you curious about the rest of the story. I could keep writing good things, but I'm probably angry with the author that none of the characters I ship will be together, so I don't want to praise it too much. It's a good story anyway.
I have been reading this novel from the Turkish version for a long time. I heard that it was coming to Webnovel and as a veteran reader, I decided to write a review. This novel has an advanced structure in terms of story. The world design is well set and described. There are several important side characters and all of them are realistic. On top of that, with the author's self-improvement, the quality is gradually increasing. Of course, if we are going to make a review here, we should also mention the bad points. While the other flaws are gradually being eliminated, there is only one flaw that caught my eye. The main character's past before reincarnation. It feels like the only thing the character lived in his previous world was playing Lunerra. There's no information about his previous life, and it's written as if the only experience he had in his previous life was a basic human experience. So is that a big problem? No, it's not. Most isekai writers don't address this issue at all. It's just glaring in a novel of this quality. But come to think of it, even Lotm didn't touch on it much and it didn't affect the quality in any way. So I don't think it's a problem.
I like the beginning of this one, but after he got consumed by some purple energy which is something related to deadly sins, story went from nice to frustrating so I dropped this. I don’t know why twisting the story like that out of nowhere, I know it gave more plot line and deep story but I just don’t like it the way putting it. I drop around chap 63
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I think this is the time for me to give a review, this novel gives a cliche initial impression which makes some people stop reading it, but I advise you to keep reading, at least finish volume 1, because there is something that makes this novel different from the novels on webnovels, this story full of plot, I mean compared to the other stories here which have really boring stories such as too much leveling, or training that makes you bored, or mc who can always overcome problems with his knowledge of the future, this novel is different, each volume will make you curious to reach its climax, MC is full of struggle and overwhelmed by a future that doesn't match his expectations, this reminds me of my favorite novels, the novel extra and author pov.
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Absolutely love this novel! The characters and plot are so well written and realistic. The MC has had a rough life but pushes forward, and even through that pushing forward has genuine struggles and moments of weakness that he leans on other characters for emotional support in order to overcome. Because of that you can really empathize with the MC and keep cheering him on even though he isn’t perfect in his choices and direction he has chosen. All of the characters genuinely feel real like that. I’m looking forward to where this story goes.
this is probably one of my favorite novel's I've read recently all the characters are loveable and the update frequency is consistent
I have been following this novel since it's earl stages (from when it had 20 chapters) and I have been enjoying every second of it. As you read the story, you can feel the effort the author has put into weaving this intricate piece of art. The plot is solid. TBH, I expected the same old cliche story of some random NEET getting overpowered inside the world of his favorite game/novel, but I couldn't have been more wrong, and I have never been so elated on being wrong before. There is some very creative stuff here. The author has put effort into doing something different from other novels of this kind and I believe his hard work has paid off. The writing quality, although not perfect, is one of the best you can find on this platform. The way the author has portrayed emotions of the characters is very realistic. The main character is neither a righteous prick nor a ruthless psychopath. He is a human with actual emotions. He feels guilty, he wants to feel pleasured, he yearns for his own happiness and peace of mind and he is afraid he might hurt people close to him. He is an actual human being with flaws. After all, it's flaws that make us humans. There is no problem with either the pacing or story development and the updates are on time every day without delays. The fact that a novel of such stature has not yet been recognized by people in this platform leaves a bitter taste in the depths of my throat. I hope to see this novel develop into a bigger masterpiece than it already is in the future so one day I can proudly state that I was an avid fan of this novel since its early stages.