Hello, Author here, This is my second time writing a novel. I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.
nice idea but you are moving too fast ...................................................
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Hello, Author here, This is my second time writing a novel. I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.