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The Astral System

Fantasy 82 Capítulos 328.4K Modos de exibição
Autor: Risaliyah

4.55 (11 Avaliações)

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Sinopse

Orphaned and plagued by unexplainable nightmares, Aiden was left struggling in a desolate world and bullied, clutching a seemingly ordinary necklace—his sole inheritance and reminder of his past.

But what does fate hold for him when he discovers that the necklace isn't so ordinary after all?

[Ding!]
[The Astral System has activated]
[Limitless Eyes Rewarded]

Granted the eyes of a certain powerful figure, He was able to change the magic fundamentals in his world.

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    Stone -- Pedra de Poder

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    Mo_242

    Shamless author here, please give my novel a try, the beginning I'd decent but I assure you it gets better. thank you

    5mth
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    Shershah_Najibzai

    You ever wanted to experience what it feels like to be an overworked Japanese Salary Man that regularly sleeps on the train with his tailored suit and pack of half empty cigarettes due to his corrupt company forcing him to work over 60 hour weeks? Then I think this is the book for you! Boy when I tell you I had seen my wife and kids for a total of two hours in the past three and a half months since reading this book, you better believe it! (I imagined my entire family) Anyway Aiden is a representation of what the author thinks he is and Mark is a representation of what he is missing from his loved ones.

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    4mth
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    Peerless_Scans

    the world needs more building but overall solid novel the author is my friend so I love supporting him

    5mth
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    The_Renouncer

    although i haven't been consistent but this book as always drawn me to webnovel i just like the promise and the ease at which the writer explains the events . it makes fantasy real in a way I can't describe. keep it going

    5mth
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    Risaliyah

    REAL SHAMLESS AUTHOR HERE, I DIDNT EXPECT SOMEONE TO BE MORE SHAMELESS THAN ME AND WRITE A REVIEW BEFORE ME. give my other novels a try and please let me know in the comments and review sections. like mo_242 here.

    5mth
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    rabaa_S

    This is a hidden gym, very captivating novel that offers a unique blend of adventure and deep emotional resonance with other characters. Set in a sad tone at the beginning, the story pulls you in with its world-building and keeps you engaged with characters who feel like real people, complete with their own struggles and growth. What truly sets this novel apart is how it resonates on a deeper level, exploring themes of self-discovery and belonging in a way that stays with you long after.

    4mth
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    DaoistqjLhGU

    The novel starts of decent, however after chapter 14 the novel peaks, the author’s improvement becomes very visible and the story novel becomes top tier.

    5mth
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    NotIkhwani

    The first novel im going to read, so im going to give it 5 stars. because the first is always special (: you know what im saying. anyway, ima make another review later when i read the chapters. see ya.

    5mth
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    elegant

    Amazing novel with rich development stage. Came from ur other novel Ascendant system. I must say you are improving rapidly keep it up author.

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    DaoistFeta

    So far its been amazing, the story is well thought and the start is not boring. and characters have their own personality. the way the mc gains power is also understandable as he works hard to gain more.

    5mth
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    Mega_101

    The main character is a fool he's so stupid they should delete him and rewrite his personality

    3mth
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