That Time I Was Reincarnated in My Hero Academia

With such a long chapter, I had high expectations, but it is a disappointment, it follows the canon to the letter, there are no variations apart from the fact that she is a woman, I expected something refreshing considering how long the chapter was, something like the first stages of the childhood showing us variations of what is known, I wouldn't mind if it were a mery sue, as long as something at least funny was done with it, but nothing, I don't mind the redundancy, only with a panel that shows statistics, If you fixed the writing so that it was at least understandable and it didn't seem like I was reading a child's diary, I'm sorry if the criticism is a little harsh, but I hope it gets better, I like it when people make stories, it doesn't matter if they're bad, At least they have the impulse to write, I tried because I thought I could do it better than many, but I only made about 2 chapters and I stopped, anyway, I'll come read it when I see the fanfic there, to see how it goes. Greetings and don't give up. (translate)

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Where you find that picture

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