Tales of Demons and Gods - I Become Chen LinJian

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The_God_Asura

Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem. I hope the author does the MC with Ziyun !!!! Fuck Nie Li.

LV 14

NewGoldie

What can say I lost interest in this novel? ................. ...................... ..................... ............. ...................

LV 7

Melshan

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LV 4

Madara1996

The story is good and character development is slightly rushed. If you are going to do only TDG then slow down, please. If world travel then it is good. I hope you don't drop the novel and will give us current intervals between each chapter. Best of luck from Fellow TDG author.

LV 5

koala1of2the3abyss

op from the beginning but does not explain almost anything an example leaves home for a few days and no one cares about it and that is only in bronze 3 stars also suddenly becomes expert in everything and does not use it, is an expert in alchemy and buy a pill instead of creating one himself, lolooololol can be more delayed ???

LV 11

WritingDreams

This is a nice story with a novel approach exploring an often ignored character Chen Linjian. This novel has a very light and comedic feel, and is for people who are not too hung up on authenticity or realism, going with the flow so to speak. Now for my ratings: Writing quality 3 stars - because grammar and spelling need a lot of work. Best get an editor or some program to put it through. Stability of release 5 stars - because why not? ;) Story Development 3 stars - this is my personal opinion as I cringe every time there are plot holes or unrealistic moments (there are a lot of those), otherwise the story is interesting. Character Development 4 stars - I would give 5 stars but the character is too op and too inconsistent in my opinion, so 4 stars. World Development 4 stars - here it is hard to get 5 stars for world building unless it is emperor domination or warlock of the magus world. I gave 4 stars as I liked the cooking theme, which had a feel of magic chef of ice and fire. Overall I believe it is a story worth reading, and the author is still working on it tirelessly. The author has a lot of ideas he mentioned to me personally, so I look forward to reading the next volumes. Thanks Zero ;)

LV 6

bleu_raijin

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LV 4

The_God_Asura

Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem. I hope the author does the MC with Ziyun !!!! Fuck Nie Li.

LV 4

The_God_Asura

Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, harem. I hope the author does the MC with Ziyun !!!! Fuck Nie Li.

LV 4

mikey99

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LV 1

Vlad_Tsapenko

Чудесная история, побольше бы таких. История получилась неплохой но последние главы не понял так она умерла или нет. И давно не было статуса мс , а гарем бистро собрался, главное не добавлять всех подряд.

LV 11

Shinmatsu

Que merda e essa cade o capitulo mano fiquei triste pq aquela mina la morreu mais feliz pois o mc enlouqueceu mata geral hahahahahaha Tem que fazer geral sofrer vai caçar o demon lord tbm mataaaa ta to ficando doido mais fazer oq ne

LV 4

Loyal_Reader

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He6ou3eMJI9l

hell how will the Japanese with their thinking read Chinese novels?...........................................................................

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ElricC

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EijiSeishuu

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Elder

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