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Between the howls and wails, the screams and cries of women being raped, and the villagers being eaten and butchered like cattle, there was a middle-aged man who was desperately running away while yelling his lungs out.
''Why.... WHY!!! YOU ABSOLUTE FUCKERS!!!''
His clothes were in tatters and marred in blood, with his body being barely able to function. His state was simply beyond recognition.
As for where he was running to... It didn't matter... He just wanted to flee the hellish scene that was unfolding behind him.
His remote village, the one he had lived in his entire life, was now a fiery beacon illuminating the night.
''Whyyyyy areeeeeee youuuuuuuuuu runninnnnnnnnnnng awwaaayyyy froooooom usssssssss?''
Terrifying low growls and voices could be perceived behind him, and every time he heard them, his body released adrenaline to try to override its limits, but to no avail as his injuries were just too severe.
The humanoid creatures pursuing him were like shadows, barely distinguishable through the cover of the night.
Their eyes, akin to black holes, were fixed on their prey as it struggled for its pathetic life. Their faint and sinister giggles kept reverberating through the darkness...
***
As blood rushed up his throat and leaked at the corners of his mouth, his sinister appearance aggravated to where he resembled a devil.
During his maniacal laugh, his punctured lungs had finally given out, causing his whole body to collapse on the ground and dyeing it a scarlet shade.
His mind went blank, while his consciousness left his battered body.
***
After what appeared to be a few minutes, he suddenly woke up.
He was startled at first, but he soon realized that he had indeed died.
Everything around him was black, without an ounce of life in sight.
He was basically a spirit floating in the absolute void.
''So this is what happens when you die... You just drift in darkness... That's actually underwhelming. I wonder if I'll just fade away''
When Derrick's thoughts started to drift, a prompt appeared in front of him.
[Welcome to System Nemesis, Derrick Tarlin]
[Would you like to seek revenge? Yes/No]
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CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE THESE CHAPTERS FREE BECAUSE I DONT HAVE MUCH FREE PASS BUDDY AND I REALLY LOVE THIS NOVEL...so can you free this novel since it's have potential and many readers will leave because of this
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this is amazing i enjoyed it so much and big thanks for the author for making this you are amazing so keep going on and hoping for more ccccccooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllll
Una historia con un enfoque que aunque no es unico esta bien desarrollado con una trama hasta ahora bien construida y con un enorme margen para explotar
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I have really enjoyed this novel thus far and have fallen in love with the characters and the power scaling thus far. I know there have been people who don't like the way some things were portrayed or how story was progress in certain ways, but as an author myself who was struggling and trying to advance my writing ability I really like what has bee done so far. Personally I can't wait for the new version of this book. Author please take your time to love what you write and that it's true to what you wanted. I promise you that in the end you won't regret it and people will love your book as much as I fo if not more.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Good story, MC is OP but lacks knowledge and decision making, doesnt always thinks steps ahead before doing something. Also what is the purpose of those 100 death knight is his not ever gonna use it?
please post more chapters brother, don't drop it I really need more chapters.😢😢 I am impressed by everything in this story, sometimes i do have problems but those are just minor issues. Also even if there are bad reviews don't let them affect you and please continue writing.
I cant stress how much i love this book. and ive been really disapointed by the three month wait period the story is geat and the mc is a antihero beautiful
I think its not bad but it gets Lots of hate ..... no story is perfect But this is by no means a bad read and i had to Complain about Anything it would be the lack of good character discription
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I really love the way this book is coming along! Its super refreshing and a good read! Ive always had a thing for the necromancer area and them being a proper MC that isnt just outright evil but is caculatiing and had a plan. I really do enjoy the book!
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This book is just all around fantastic but I would really like if the author released a new chapter, but all and all the book is great the world is huge and interesting, the characters are actually intelligent most of the time and you can tell this book was thought out
This novel is quite awesome with all the ways that he is growing stronger and how the system is updating with him. It has a ton of unique ideas and its a good read.
Wonderful story... I'm impressed... please hurry up and write more chapters.... can't wait...the author has a great potential to be a renown writer...kudos...keep it up
/CONTINUATION UPDATE: 18-11-2024/ Hi everyone, author here! After completing a few projects of mine and getting back into the groove of things, I can finally say that I'm taking back on this huge project! As some of you may know, it's no secret that writing over 130 000 words on a story can be particularly taxing, especially with a regular schedule and another job. But after letting time do its thing, I've regained what I felt I'd lost, which is passion. It's the reason why I left it alone for so long. I'd rather let it sit and stew than ruin the story and lose those invested in it. But what's in store now? Well, I've not been idling doing nothing. I've written other stories, matured and, more importantly, been acquiring a better, and frankly cleaner, writing style. This means I'm currently going over every chapter (re-writing some and fixing story plots in others), meaning you can expect a muuuuuuuch better version of the novel you already loved. This process should last about 15-20 days (Man, I was writing a lot), but don't expect new chapters to drop when it's done. One thing I learned is that it's better to accumulate a bank, which will be 15 chapters long. This'll ensure that no long hiatus happen again. And that's all I had to say today! Thanks to everyone who stuck around, and I hope to see you back in the comments :)