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After her life ended tragically in modern day Asia, Mayang woke up in the body of a beautiful princess.
“This was god’s divine intervention! I will live powerfully as a ruler, with citizens to rely on me and countries that will love me!”
However, not all reincarnations are miracles from god. In Mayang’s case, this was divine punishment. On her first day as queen, they wiped all her citizens out. Choking and bleeding out, she only had one thought.
“Fack you, god. Curse you for ruining my life then and now. I made a mistake believing in you. Never again.”
Her last breath turned into her first. Again. And again.
Escaping into the wastelands, Mayang finally thought it would relieve her duties as a ruler, forgetting all the sins she committed the night before. The anarchy, the pain, their deaths. That was until…
“Miss, please help us!”
( here’s music to listen to for the hype parts : https://open.spotify.com/playlist/6sDYNoOqSsD4Ob4hEcOhyA?si=5-2l-01rSs-WalswYJsMCQ
And here’s music for the sad parts : https://open.spotify.com/playlist/3KX2FL4sMaXplpzKF7qkVr?si=r8MUKwO9QS6swA8adSKp2Q
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The imagery used reels you in, along with the witty remarks by the MC, leaving you asking for more. I'm not going to lie, this is going to be the first non-top ten power stone story i'll actually set some time aside to read.
The writing skill of the author is great. I can easily imagine the actions, feelings and emotions within the story. The perspective of the MC is sometimes hilarious great job for the author lightening the mood while the settings are dark or serious. You can also relate to the MC since she was once a resident of the modern world. The pacing is fast which is good for me. I'm also getting curious about what kind of relationship Love and Mayang would have in the future. Because the way they interact especially Mayang is somewhat ambiguous for me. This book has potential
Your writing was really good and I enjoyed it a lot. There minor phrasing and misspelling issues here and there which can be really easy to overlook, but overall these weren't too big of an issue. I feel like you're going at a great pace for the story, Each chapter had a good ending and a good lead into the next. The thing I would work on the most is character design and description. I don't have an idea of what the main character looks like at all, and I have decent one of what Love looks like. I think that by the 4th chapter readers should have a picture in their heads of the main characters.
Writing skill is great! It express the action,the feelings of the situation and emotions of the characters. The story goes perfectly with the flow and the bit of humor in the story makes it better.
The novel was well written. Everything was great other than the fact everything was cramped together. Maybe it was my laptop that made it seem like that, but yea if you fix that then it would have been a 5*.
I really like the story so far. The descriptions are vivid and work towards building the world background. The writing could improve as for some in inconsistencies (MC knowing things before them being properly explained), but overall it has a really good narrative. I like the main character's personality, she's smart and funny. I'm excited to keep reading, props to the author!
The authors writing is actually amazing, the description are also very easy to imagine, which is something most can't do and I wished I was this good at writing. The book is definitely worth the read as I enjoyed it.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
First of all, your writing quality is superb, no mistakes or grammatical errors, which makes it easy for me to flow with the novel. Then, the novel, though still with very few chapters seems interesting already and makes me wonder what will happen next. It's a very good read and I recommend it for readers.