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Solo Leveling System with Upgrade (indeterminate hiatus-Sorry-)
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A guy is accidentally killed by God when he tries to change his luck or rather his lack of it. As retribution God lets you reincarnate in a world of your choice and create your legend or harem. The first world was Naruto, which ones will be next?
IMPORTANT: I have no copyright on Anime Naruto and none of the anime worlds that appear in this story, I'm just an ordinary guy who is making a story half a mouth for hobby
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Ao melhor. Tudo é perfeito. Esta é a MELHOR Fanfic. . Por favor, não deixe cair isso. E não apresse a história, como muitos outros fanfics. Mantenha o bom trabalho.
GG, Mr sung will be rank SS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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I don't ask for much of the authors of the novels I read, just give me: a decent plot, an MC that isn't a complete idiot, and follow the rules you set up for that universe (i.e. be consistent). I even avoid picking novels with tags that don't meet my interests. Seems simple, right?
Revelar Spoiler A boring read, no character development, MC does some really stupid stuff occasionally, which is why I dropped it. Examples: doesn't want people to know about his skills and growth, gains stealth skill, still signs up through the normal method of doing dungeons when he could just sneak in. Stops the demon castle quest at 10, 001/10, 000 souls, when the one time he learned he could go over a cap for a quest he was rewarded with a hidden completion that gave an insane reward.
Revelar Spoiler Interesting premise ruined by poor execution. It's starts with interesting premise but when main character become strongest hunter in the world quickly go downhill from there. My main gripe with this novel what it have plot point which don't go anywhere. Remember nurse which he get phone number? You never hear from her. What about Juhee healer from first party which we see? Who's what? Later main character create guild for himself, what he do with it? Absolutely nothing. But the main sin which author commit by completely botching finale:
Revelar Spoiler Those mysteries disappoint. Moving on, this is a classic weak-to-strong power fantasy in the form of stats and skills, and for the most part, I dislike this progression. In Dragon Ball Z, once scouters introduced power levels in the form of numbers, Akira Toriyama pigeonholed himself. Planets were already doomed with power levels in the thousands. By Dragon Ball Super, who knows how high those numbers were. Suffice to say, he retconned the idea and stopped mentioning them because numbers soared to ridiculous heights while strength stagnated and leveled off. Stats are blunt and limiting as progression. There's a reason story elements often refuse to mix with game ones. For example, characters that, story-wise, are the biggest, baddest mofos. Yet when they join your party, they're two levels lower than your courageous but naive teenage protagonist. Why? Balance. Again, gameplay doesn't mix well alongside story. Likewise, it makes little sense in this novel. Points in strength makes Jin-Woo stronger. It's
Revelar Spoiler I Alone Level-up, or Solo Leveling, had as much potential as its protagonist, Sung Jin-Woo, but fails to live up to its possibilities toward the climax. This review contains minor, obvious spoilers, e.g. He gets really strong, and is restricted to the novel version. First off, the plot. Gates open, monsters attack, and certain humans awaken to combat threats. Simple enough to give readers for this type of story what they want; a cool guy doing cool stuff. Then the author tries to do more than he was capable of. In fact, I believe he had no idea where he was going halfway through due to the strange conclusion. Everything people enjoyed in the first hundred chapters is discarded to explain the gates and Jin-Woo's leveling system. Those mysteries disappoint.
Revelar Spoiler Sorry but I have to be real here, on my perspective this is like being in heaven down to hell. How I say It's like heaven; Well the start is how the MC shows his courage and wits in the start being a low rung adventurer (more like a baggage boy) encountering deadly situations but still persist because of his on plague of his duties being fillal for his mama. Then suddenly he gets placed in a death trap and can still keep his cool and being observant, showing his chivalry and wits but gets f*cked up on being left behind BUT SUDDENLY *Plot armor descends* When he escapes from that sh*t (plot armor) and wakes up from the hospital with his f*cking foot regenerated and a 'game interface' suddenly pops up making him do quest and all his 'IQ' that made me sigh in amazement seems to vanish in thin air. Like TF? You got your foot back and your still alive but you can't seem to handle the interface and makes you think it's an illusion/hallucination or somesort. Which made me sad on how fast his IQ changes from high to low. There is also a lot of inconsistency like; How MC having a 'Young Master' vibe when facing those what he calls 'Lizard' and then he just kills them like squishing a bug. And the hell did he learn on how to wield a dagger? (It's like; mehh, wielding dagger MC is cool so let's make him use it) and how the heck did the emotional progression happened that fast when I can still remember him posting a 'lvl up interface' in some web and he never bothered to tear it down cause HE WANTS TO KNOW THE f*ckING ANSWER TO WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM. HAHAHAHA Damn. It's like you being soft but suddenly being injected with a Viagra. No kidding. Boom. His father just magically becomes one of the strongest man and he comes out of the dungeon? What a coincidence. Printed 'baggage carrier' team mate that he just run into. Where the hell did those guys who the MC saved when he was in the hospital? It's like 'let us part ways cause we escape and never see each other again' and even the MC never bothered to see them? I mean I get it with his new power and all but, like the hell? Where's the human ethic. Boom suddenly learns he can understand the native of the dungeon and learns some sort of theory on how it is some gate to conquer earth Earth and MC is considered a 'monster' Well I considering this is a worthwhile novel because of those tons of 5* rating is a bit overrated. I guess everybody have different taste.
A la fin, relation amoureuse avec Cha Hae-In pas poussé, il n'a même pas au moins recu le rang de chasseur de rang national, il n'a même pas rencontrer son père ...
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I just read the chapter 1 and 2 and the flow of reading is bad the story is bad why would ANBU go there and the hokage let someone he dose not know in the villages this story is trash.
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Just how many references are you going to bring in hahahaha but it's interesting well how do I say...... If I have to say I think you should increase the amount of money he possess cause in the beginning the anbu went to him cause they sensed a huge amount of chakura/mp and in the status it's kinda low so increase it
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I know this novel is great and all but why is the chapter releasing super super super slow 😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧😧
You are just stealing from other novels and still it's trun a into a garbage First you start with anime - in another world with my smartphone Then solo leveling manga- E rank dungeon , daily quest , and why the planty for not completing quest (solo leveling manga has its reason but why did you used that planty , will system force Sora to kill some one because they fighting Sora with killing instinct , and your GOD why would he mantion harem it should be mc's decision or a story line that creates that kind of situation, why would God even suggest that and if God wants a harem or may be happy life then he will not add planty in any quest it should mc's choice that he wants to be strong or he wanted a easy life ,become a cook or may be mary some one ) Your story from beginning it's like some otaku's imagination ( not complaining though , I mean even I imagined something like that ) but your story's base is weak , explain me why did anbu says strong chakra in first chapter his MP mean chakra was weak . I mean you want him to start weak and then climb to top so why did you send 20 anbu to pick him up , And for tsunade she is not some girl who will bluss every time some one compliment her I mean she was trained with jiraya the most perverted person in history . she is strong not only physically but also mentally. Seriously wrost story line I mean since you are stealing from other manga and anime ( the famous ones) that means you don't have to put some efforts in world building and character's background and you didn't but .. you didn't put efforts in story either to be true you did nothing except stealing and common imagination