Sinopse
A young man One piece fan is a dedicated person he watch everything of one piece when he is a kid. Giving a chance what he will become to the one piece world.
(Even this is a fan fiction. I'm not really good at the storyline of one piece but this is my best anime 100%)
(The picture and the story of one piece is not mine and credit to the creator)
(I know my english is bad just bare with me because this is just a past time for me. I just sharing my imagination to my readers)
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It's great so far just sometime wrong in grammar. And it's already say the author that this is just a past time so it's ok. ChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapterChapter
can u tell me where get this novel and what original name this novel? if u have website raw can u give me/ i want read raw! [sorry if my english bad. i not good speak english]
This is great so far! Mc not too op. A bit slow pace. The bad thing is about the writing and grammar. I dont care much about grammar. But you still got word that messed up, its kinda confuse reader. My suggest is you should read again your chapter after you write it
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Another trash fanfic with atrocious and borderline unreadable writing, barely defined plot and characters Another trash fanfic with atrocious and borderline unreadable writing, barely defined plot and characters
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Interesting start. But he becomes way too overpowered way too fast. Then he gets a system which is ok. He also doesn’t need to eat anything but fish. Wierd
Need some more chapter :) Need some more chapter :) Need some more chapter :) Need some more chapter :) Need some more chapter :) Need some more chapter :)
Really disappointed with the quality of the grammar so so so many errors, it's like the author did not even review his own work before posting it.
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The Story is going great so far, Let's see what the future holds .................................................................... . .
I would reccomend the author to use gramarly free version. The story is unreadable. Might change the rating if the story becomes more readable.
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