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SEDUCING TRENT VANDERWOOD

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Autor: Codeblack54

4.12 (17 Avaliações)

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Ella Patterson pretended to be a boy and joined the house of Justice in other to prove her father's innocence but all her plans were ruined when a narcissistic pure blood vampire entered her life.

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6_SHINIGAMI_9

good story, good concept, excellent characters, want more chapters 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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Zuleihat

this is an amazing book you are very talented author, I like the placing of your words, the suspense you give in every chapter making a reader wants to go on and on. great novel👍

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MWse
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The writing quality isn't bad. But the mistake I've noticed in several places is that you use punctuation (,) at the end of many dialogues instead of (./!/?). Or you forget to put (?) when someone asks something. Another mistake(not necessarily grammar) is that you leave too often blank spaces between your phrases. It's ok to leave a blank space from time to time, for example between 2 people's dialogue or spread a description in multiple smaller pieces; but leaving a blank space between every one or two phrases of a few words is a hard no! I didn't read the whole story so I'll give 5* to Story Development. As well as for character design, in the parts that I read, I didn't see anything that told me about the characters, so I leave it 4*. The world background is almost nonexistent, In every chapter should be an amount of description which says where are the characters, how is the weather, is it cold/warm, the senses of smell/sight/hearing etc. In the last two chapters, I saw only dialogue with not enough information about where the action happens. I hope this review will be helpful!

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GODOFCAT

I'm actually not fun of romance but this novel was literally busin, keep it up author and I hope your novel would get its right views........

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Ebwaseh_Joseph

Interesting. Keep up the good work, I like the characters. The main lead is crazy and I hope that he won't make her crazy. keep up the good work Author.

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Faith_Sullivan_6540

Is nice, it has a good storyline. The male is a very interesting character, so I want to see more of him, I also want to see how Ella will win his heart and save her families reputation.

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Hajara_Aliyu

I love it, the story is nice and has a lot of potential and I love Trent's character, I also want to see more of him and I can't wait for the both of them to fall in love.

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Daoistd0KBok

Is really interesting, I like the characters and the way the story is going. I wish you success keep up the good work and make to correct your mistakes before you publish any chapter, also give me spoilers. 🤓

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Lisha_Brown

I love the story it has potential, but you need to improve your writing skills. if anyone is looking for a novel to read, I will highly recommend you read this book.

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Abdulrahman_Aleeyu

So far the story seems interesting, it has a lot of plot twists and wow moments but you will need to improve your writing skills. I don't have much to say

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Black_Rose_1680

It has a nice and interesting storyline, but you have to improve your writing skills and improve your word background, You're trying with your description but you still need to improve. I love the story keep up.

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Dija_Aliyu_0834

I love it, it has an amazing storyline. I am not a fan of vampire novels, but I like this one because it doesn't focus much on the vampires. keep up the good work.

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Alovee_Angh

It is progressing greatly. The male lead is arrogant and narcissistic but interesting, the female lead has a valid motive to work under him and the side characters commentary are also noteworthy. World building is great uptill now. Keep it up and please upload more contents.

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DaoistUh8n7g

the story is nice. is going in a good direction although there are a lot of mistakes. I can see our Author is improving. Good luck I wish you success.

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linda_paul

the story is going in an interesting direction and I can't wait for the day, my girl Ella seduces Trent. am laughing imagining how she will do it and if she will succeed and I really like your novel. I can't wait to read more chapters and please, increase the chapters, they're short.

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AngryCat323

Am enjoying it and am not happy that is not much and I have to be waiting everyday to read so please try and release as many chapters as possible.

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King_Legion

I like the story it has potential. so keep up the good work and improve on your skill. am rooting for you. 💜 also please increase the chapters, they're short.

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