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Two world
Two girls.
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"Host, what are you planning?" The system asked, feeling that Olivia was up to something mischievous again.
Olivia rolled her eyes. "You will found out soon."
And then, Brian stepped in.....
"Ah!
Destroy me...
Yes!
Cripple me!
Make me unable to walk for a whole week!
Oh my god! Brian go harder!
yes!! that's it!
You're hitting the right spot!
ahhhhhh."
The entire filming crew were dumbfounded, while Brian stare at the woman who he didn't even lay his hand on, looking into his eyes and moaning intentionally.
"What's the meaning of this?" He asked.
Olivia Smith, whose soul is now inside Emma William's, smirk at him before speaking up,
"Oh, you're about to cum?" She asked.
"What!"
'Let's see if you wouldn't fall in love with me after today.' She said in her head.
"Don't hold back baby. Fill me up with your juice and let my inside marvel in your holy water. yessss, ahhhh!"
Meet Olivia Smith. The rich proud princess who transmigrated into the poor body of her doppelganger and had to complete the system task if she ever wanted to access the ultimate time reverse system and return to the past to avoid her death.
She believed that no one can resist her charm and there's nothing she cannot do.
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'You can do it, Emma!' After assuring herself in her head, Emma William, the poor girl whose soul was now inside Olivia Smith's own, knocked on the door to Maximilian's office.
"Come in," came a sexy and manly voice, from inside.
Taking a deep breath, Emma barged in, and saw him looking as delicious as always, with his legs crossed and typing on his laptop.
"Can I help you?" Max frowned slightly at who just entered, because Olivia Smith has made him hate her before the body swap, leaving Emma to deal with it now.
"Fall in love with me." Came Emma's voice.
"Excuse me?"
"I want you to fall in love with me Max, so name your price." Emma said!
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Nicely done may. I like this plot and i like the characters. Hope this novel will go a long way. To redears, give this a try. Author is very passionate about her work. You can be assured to be given a unique story.
You are very good at story telling ! ! ! ! ! It’s pretty difficult to get me wanting more in each chapter and you completely have me hooked ! ! ! ! ! I keep thinking “d*mm I don’t want to read the next POV cause I’m so into this one and want more” but then once I start reading the next one I begin to feel the same towards that one ! ! ! ! !
Intresting plot. I am eagerly looking forward for the next chapters. Olivia and Emma's characters are perfectly designed and the character development in great. I strongly believe that this book have a strong base. Though it's been only four chapters so far, it drawed my attention. Kuddos to author. (ME : Waiting for ML ☺☺😉)
I really like this story. It's a really interesting plot. I love both the characters and am looking forward for more chapters. To every readers out there, you don't know what you are missing if you don't read this.❤️
I really like the idea and reminded me of my favorite movie from the 70's about twin girls who got separated at birth. One was raised by a poor woman and she was a loudmouth badass girl who acts like a thug, while the other one was raised by their rich parents. She was meek and always bullied by her step sister and step mother after parents passed away (mother died first and father took a new wife). Both ran away from home and 'found' by the wrong family. It was so satisfying to see the thug faceslapped her twin sister's bullies and the weak sister had to learn to walk on the rope as the other one was working as street performer. They were later reunited and found out they were twins. Happy ending :). So, when I saw the synopsis of this novel, I am so excited! Two female leads with two intertwined stories. I've read the early chapters and love how it was executed. Excited to read more. Good luck!
Another story from one of my favorite authors. Like always you have came up with another unique plot and I look forward to reading it ❤ Aside from the plot, the author has managed to pull of the characters absolutely amazingly, and the world background as well. 😍 All the story needs is a little bit of editing in terms of grammar and the author will be good to go! I look forward to reading more chapters. Wish you all the luck! ❤❤❤
I have to say that the author improved a lot a lot. The story is very interesting and mature. I like mature novels. The plot is also interesting. Hope to see more of emma and olivia's stort. Kisses 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
It was really amazing starting I think that world 1 and world 2 will maybe merged ahead.. I think the story will be awesome ahead... I loved the content
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Ah olvia you are awesome . Emma not bad truly not bad.. Brian you sicko! Ah max.. Well max.... Yeh read the book to find out the details. 😅😅😅 Anyway it is a very interesting read. Totally attention grabbing and in noway subpar, it's hard to have two fl characters and to top it off they switched bodies. Still, our author pulled it over making both the total opposite of each other with wonderful twists in between.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes. It’s interesting to see how both FLs have almost polar opposite attitudes. They both also have their own problems which will be interesting to see how the different FL handles it.
Its different from all the stories.I like olivia's part most and also Max character and let me telk you the filming part was hotttt..!! Great work author.Keep it up.
The theme had me. I am interested in how this story will go. We have doppelgangers and a completely new twist to the transmigration trope. That is enough for me to read the novel. Dear author, good work!
That was very promising starting. I give you: Writing Quality: 4 Stability of Updates: 4.5 Story Development: 4.5 Character Design: 5 World Background: 5 (So far)
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I prefer this story compared to all the other 'time travel' or 'transmigration' novels. One of the biggest positives of this story is the fact that there is real character growth, making them seem less two-dimensional and therefore more realistic.
Author is a world builder. Expecting great things. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.
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Writing quality is good Chapter update stability is excellent Well designed characters with good background setting Waiting for more chapters Keep up the good work author 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Shamelessly reviewing my own book(^.^) This story has been on my mind for a while now. A mixture of different elements. Be ready to laugh, frown and experience tons of emotional roller coaster from this plot, as it will surely brings those effects. If you're not comfortable with mature content, this book might not be very suitable for you, but there's an option of omitting those chapters, as they wouldn't hinder your understanding of the plot. Thanks for checking out the book, hope you enjoy the reading❤