Sanctuary: Charles Xavier

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IKQualityContent

I’ve been reading your books for a long time. This is a great story and I hope you turn this into a masterpiece. A lot, of the stories I’ve read by you are pretty short. If you can expand upon this story and truly delve deep into the characters and setting, I don’t mind leaving a nice tip at the hundred chapter mark. Anyway, I think the story is starting off great and if taken the right path could be the most impactful self insert you’ve written. Charles Xavier, has more depth and potential than Pietro could ever have. I’m eagerly awaiting the butterflies. Good luck and thank you.

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Daoist721221

Nice to see someone who seems to know alot about comic books write some x-men/mutant Stories................................................

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Plebston323

Writing quality: Mistakes here and there, but not so bad. I recommend Grammarly to fix this. 4/5 Stability of Updates: Terrible, dropped. 1/5 Story development: Story is a pale imitation of the original, with little effort in it. 1/5 Character design: The character makes decisions without thinking much, and somehow knows a lot about technology that doesn't exist at 4 because he's a 'super genius' which is a title given to him for only his past knowledge. Hundreds of options and he chooses the lesser ones. 1/5 World background: Pale imitation, 3/5

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ReMormius

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Little_El

(the rating could change)Charles Xavier is a character I really don't like, mental rapist, his stupid decision with Jean and the Phoenix, and all these other decisions loll The guy could have been a game-changer for mutants instead he lives a fantasy of living in harmony with average humans, uuuuuuh really man? But now I'm excited, the character has potential, I hope the MC knows his comics well. I remember Sinister's hideouts are really technologically advanced so having them will be really good, the apocalypse celestial ship too.Charles could form a base for mutants on a different planet or have the option to send and work with terrestrial aliens (so much possibility)Uh, I believe there was a country filled with mutant I believe, I don't remember if he was slaves if so, wipe out the executioners and make this country even more developed than Wakanda So many possibilities, I can't wait to see what you gonna do with this story and plz Plz Plz no Harem 😭😭😭 And an unparalyzed Charles will be great too.

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Daoist721221

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dao_of_plow_6969

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