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Delilah Frost uncharmed by the suitors that her father had fancied for her tends not to care about the young gentlemen from whom she had to pick from. Giving up the idea of true love and a man who loves her for who she is rather than crown and kingdom goes to a ball and meets a handsome charming man Eric Corrigan is he the man delilah had longed for was he a friend for a foe???
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The combination of a captivating story, memorable characters, and breathtaking prose sets this book apart as a must-read for any lover of literature.
This is a very good read the title really represents how good this book is the character is amazing and being able to watch them interact is a spectacle
I will update my reviews once the chater count goes up. Writing Quality - Currently it's lacking but since author is new it's fine to experiment. Keep in mind your first book is going to be worst but you don't stop writing. Cause next attempt is going to be even better than this. Story Development - I can't say clearly it gives the feel of fast pace with the quick rejection and the ball coming up. Character Design - I kinda like Mc but i hope author don't goes with the troupe 'she is not like other girls she rides horses, or she has brown hair hazel nut eyes her hair put in a bun without efforts but she looked stunning. At the same time she compliments about her looks. to her it felt people didn't respect her for who she was but only looked at her face.' Her dad kinda gets a warning from me. Let your daughter have a choice. (Quite hypocritical of me i know.) and i want him to have an intro bro got done bad. I know he is a side character but he is her father give him some paragraph. The nanny 5 stars Updating Stability - Take your time 😁 Quality over quantity. World background - It seemed to be historic with royalty but i can't tell the time period. I am sure it's going to be a good novel. Keep up the good work author. Don't be demotivated by anything.
Can't exactly judge because it only has one chapter though the premise seems very interesting also, I will provide a helpful advice pls give quotation marks since it will help readers to differentiate between quotes and narrative. Hoping to see more
Gorgeous story line! Royalty love is my absolute weakness! Keep up the great work!
A great read, the author's writing is clear and concise allowing the readers to immerse inside the story. The descriptions are vivid and the main character Zhong Peng is very relatable. Overall, a promising novel with great potential...
Now that there are more than 5 eps let's review; - First; There's improvement as compared to before. -Second; The sentence structure is not in flow making it hard for readers, there's alot of mistakes as well. -Third; Its Readable but there's no wow factor. -Fourth; Story is quite unique but because there no wow factor that's why reader won't stick to it. Hope u carry on, it's always hard for new Authors. Try to make the sentence better. All the best.
The story is interesting and fun to read when you wanna chill out , you did good dear Author ....But I would like to suggest that you use quotation marks " " when writing the character's words and try to separate dialogues and casual statements or narration . Am sure you'll nail it if you do so . All in all keep up the good work
The story has a light-hearted, 'Love is in the air' kinda vibe. Quick read, well-paced, and the writing style is good. If you look past the grammar, and minor errors and focus on the MC, you'll like her. We get to know her and her life as the story moves forward. The story and writing get better with every new chapter.
Please take this review lightly, since you have a lot of time to look over everything and become a better writer! I will say, you should definitely impeove the quality. If that seems like a lot, post one or two chaps a week. it is better! Remember, quality over quantity!
I like the FL very much !The story is interesting! Keep writing despite the grammar mistakes !
The quality of This novel is terrific, and the characters feel lifelike. Although I usually don't read romance novels, -The novel's writing quality is phenomenal and admirable. I felt immersed. -The story is well written and thought out. -The character's personalities are all unique and well-fleshed out. -And the world background is easy to understand and well explained.
I found the title interesting then after reading the starting chapters I can tell this is a good story and now I am hooked looking forward to read more chapters!
I feel like I am seeing actual royal affairs in play. This has so much understanding of the life of a princess and arranged marriages. It has a touch of court drama but not too much it feels cliché. Just the right amount. The romance setting is mildly enjoyable and thrilling to read.[img=recommend] One issue though author//: If you remove the paragraph signs from none conversation lines it would make the work much easier to read in the first chapters. All in all. I want more.[img=update]
The story is very good, it has a good background to it and the characters are likeable even after just a few chapters of reading. Thank you mr author!
Personally, I feel that there needs to be a little bout detail in a chapter the amount of interaction is fine but it feels like as a reader I'm just listening to a conversation on the side; but it is interesting. Personally im not that big of a fan to the romance genre.
A very good read! I loovve the characters and their interactions! It;s so swweett and lovely and charming. I really enjoy reading about them