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Rise Of Immortal Dawn
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Dawn, along with a group of friends that also possess strong mental powers goes to explore space and gets asked by God to help with special missions that they are uniquely able to accomplish as he shows them how using science enabled him to create the universe and everything in it in just seven days.
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That's a fresh theme and creative work in narration! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact ttringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *）. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Pretty good flow of the book and I like the way you introduce plenty of new characters in the book. Looking forward to many more chapters too.
first few chapters might bore folks wanting to jump straight into the action but the character's backstories were explained while the characters were being developed. but once the characters get introduced things start getting interesting. btw, I tried to be honest but I am the author so my point of view might be a touch biased. so if you think differently (good and bad) post your own review or comment and I'll try to improve.
