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Return Of The Rejected Luna
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After getting rejected by her mate, Hayley finds herself in the arms of the most feared Alpha in the Kingdom.
He claims her as his mate, and she is taken away to his kingdom to become his bride. However, upon arrival, she discovers that her newly found mate was nothing like the stories foretold.
With his help, Hayley is able to find herself, and her history. And now she returns to the land that had once rejected her to claim what is rightfully hers.
Will she show mercy to the people that once trampled on her happiness? Or will this new Heiress bring destruction to her enemies?
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I’ve just started reading but the story has kept my attention. Proud dumb Alpha rejects mates for being seemingly weak, another stronger and smarter Alpha accepts her without question and is gentle. I like the setup enough to keep reading. Looking forward to her getting strong and the relationship build. Thanks for the story.
from 10 minutes reading it's okay so far, no major writing error. The storyline is quite common for starting chapters.
I'm here for the event. I have only read the beginning chapters. I think you can add some more details in the chapters like the first chapter was alright until the rejection. the rejection could be more detailed and the emotions could be highlighted. then the meeting was okay but it just felt a little flat. there was less tension after the rejection. After that, it felt like everything happened in a second. there could be more details, so that the atmosphere felt more tense which would feel more rewarding when she was rescued. the emotions could be more nuanced. From a plot point of view, there is potential.
Books about redemption or rediscovery are usually mood lifting . Having a man who is everything is gold. Hope they stick together till the end. Thanks for the good book.
Es una buena historia. Aunque el comienzo es similar a otras novelas, le da un giro interesante. La recomiendo
i enjoy this novel. It is a gold . .. . . . . .