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reborn in modern family with wishes

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Autor: shikakusama

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MC REBORN IN MODERN FAMILY WITH WISHES

is about a boy who died and meet a kind god/rob and reborn in modern family to enjoy his second life and find his true love and her crazy family(haley x mc)

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  1. shikakusama
    shikakusama Contribuído 40
  2. RyuSenju
    RyuSenju Contribuído 15
  3. commander_pride_21
    commander_pride_21 Contribuído 6

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Kazvx
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Put more Chapter ++++++

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Compelled_reader

2 stars of writing quality because it isn't sophisticated enough it's to informal. 1 star for stability updates cuz haven't updated in 9 months 2 stars for story development because development can be described as confusing. 1 star character design because the author doesn't describe well and uses images to help shows what he's trying to portray in words 2 stars in world background because there's barely any to be found.

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DeejaeSutherland

The writing quality needs better improvement as well as better grammar and vocabulary, the story development needs major improvements, seeing how fast you got the Mc together with Haley even when they are soulmates, especially so when you had the Mc pretty much confess his love for haley three hours after meeting each other, the character design is okay but sometimes you have to describe the characteristics instead of just posting a picture, it would have been better if you did both instead of doing only one of the two, the updating stability needs work since there's only 8 chapters for 1200 to 2000 words per chapter, and if I could I wouldn't even give the world background a star with how bad it is or the lack of.

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shikakusama

Author Shameless Review Just continue reading it might get better and I still learning so I will get better at writing so just sit back and relax and wait for more updates and you will see

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Lance_

Enjoying for the most part, just please go your own way with the story and not just copy that other Modern Family fic. Keep it up

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lelouch_7448

I liked it, please don't drop it, I want more of this FanFiction........,.............................................................................................

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Guilherme_S_Neto

dropped? .....................

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Malikim

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