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A man appears in a room, without many memories and without a name due to a system error and to compensate a little for the problems that caused him, he receives an "old" version of the gamer system.
Little by little he recovers his memories and begins to discover that the small error of which he was the victim is nothing more than the beginning of a disaster.
- The system is based on the game Ragnarok Online, a small part of the story takes place in the game but it will focus more on the worlds where the MC will enter.
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This is my first story, also English is not my first language so any problem that exists I will appreciate if you mention it.
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*I don't own the novels, games, mangas, animes, and movies.
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I'm liking the story so far a lot, it's give me nostalgic vibes, my only concern is with the romance aspect of the story, there are way to much girls for only rune midgard over 20 and it's really hard to remember even the frist 5 slave girls he obtained.
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This is not very objective, but I've been a fan of Ro for more than 10 years, so I can't not give it 5 stars, I hope you update often because I'll be attentive. Regards.
I love ragnarok. Com. Com. Com q. Com. Com. Com. Com. Com. Com. Com. Com. Com. Q. Com. Com. Com. Com. Com ww w. Qqqq I love ragnarok
is MC gonna stay in Ragnarok forever, or he can travel to other world or something ?
the premise is nice enough, but the story doesn't help, in the first place the thing about most of the side characters acting like npcs was awful. Way too many jumps in story points it feels almost disjointed , plot holes (of course),and a dash of grammar errors(not that i can throw any stones but its an early warning), some phrases take away immersion making characters feel even more robotic
It is literally the first FF that I find about RO, which for me already gives it a lot of points since it is nostalgic, the story, the beginning was a bit chaotic and the level rises a bit extreme, the first thing gets better with each chapter and the latter is understandable from the point of view that the MC will surely get multiple jobs. And the chapters are quite extensive, some have a lot of information dump but this is necessary if they are not familiar with the game and again it fixes it with how extensive some chapters are. I am not a native of the language so I could not say anything about it, but in general it is a good FF that is worth following and I just hope that the author gives it some kind of term even if it is in the world of Rune Midgart =)