Quick Transmigration Of The Divine Phoenix

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Guys, today I just updated chapter 1 and don't forget to check it out... Hope you like what I updated for chapter 1. You can say it that I wrote a love poem but my poem skills sucks very much, therefore I just hope whatever I wrote makes sense to you. And guys thank you for your support. And I am very sorry because I can't update daily because I am going to have some exams this month, so I can only post the chapters in a irregular pattern... Bye, have a nice day!

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Hi guys! I am the author of this book.... Quick Transmigration Of The Dark Pheonix is mainly about Yu Meng, a genius, who was killed in her original world because by her sister, who was a very important person in her heart. And then got a system named 'Glory of the Goddess' system. The Glory of the Goddess system gives many types of task, it doesn't have a clear limit. And our system here is Xue Yun. Xue Yun is cute, understanding, caring and is sensible towards Yu Meng. Both Yu Meng and Xue Yun are dependant towards each other. Now let's talk about Yu Meng, it is like this, your first impression of her will be that she is cold, aloof and dull but she is not really like that. Yu Meng is actually very nice and has a kind heart but she like to play with the main protagonist in the storylines. She always likes to entertain herself by making the main protagonists life miserable but if the female lead or perhaps the male is good by nature then she is very good to the and treats them like her companions. As for the male lead, you will naturally know about it in the future but I can make sure it is love at first sight for both of them. Bye guys, if you like my book and this piece of writing, then please share you thought about it with everyone.......

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LuluoO

Fine read. Pretty enjoyable. 💗 I'll wait for more! [img=update] Thanks for a good work and good luck! 😇 ⬅️This is a lucky halo for the author.

This is a very nice story I love how the mc character is designed and the system is also cute. So I am still waiting for more chapter, keep it up Author 🤗😍

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Soun_Phavin

It's a good story you should read, the system and the character are very well written. The plot and the writing style were awesome. The cover, the first chapter, and the prologue are so interesting as well.

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Sjsnwhnxshsh1

Pretty good. Some more complex vocabulary would definitely improve the writing. The characters need to be more defined, but good luck and good job!

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Prince_nonchalant

I haven't read many transmigration books so I didn't know what to expect. However, I'm sure that anyone that loves these kinds of books will at least take a look at it and read through. It doesn't seem like a bad book in any way. I also liked how the first chapter began with a poem. Not many books do that from my experience, so props to the author. Synopsis: Gave the introduction to the story quite neatly. However, there were a few grammatical errors present that could be addressed. Writing Quality: Far from unreadable but there were a few run-on sentences, missing words, and incorrect use of punctuations. But there aren't that many so it doesn't bother the reader as much. Story Develoment: Moves at a decent pace or rather quickly lol. The first chapter immediately got into it with the MC being crushed which almost seemed out of nowhere. That was cool. Character Design: Not much was said in regards to the characters but I usually don't mark authors down for this because it's a matter of preference tbh. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look rather than have them described so this could go both ways. Overall, keep pressing forward author. I'm sure you can gain the views and fanbase you require if you push hard enough!

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Nangong_Yanmu

nice work, author! Keep this up and update more and tell us more about the ML. I want to know more about him! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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leoreview1

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