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Primordial Vampire
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In a magical world where everyone is born with powers, a nameless boy struggles to survive on the streets. Orphaned and alone, he has no family, no friends, and, worst of all, no powers.
Living in a world where strength defines one's worth, he endures countless hardships and brushes with death, his spirit refusing to be extinguished.
Despite the cruelty of his circumstances, he never admits defeat. He fights, claws, and survives in the living hell of the streets, believing that perhaps the gods have forgotten him if they even exist.
But one day, everything changes. Out of nowhere, a mysterious system awakens within him:
[the Primordial Vampiric System]
This is his chance, his awakening, the power that could reshape his destiny. But with great power comes great challenges, and the boy must now navigate a world that has never been kind to him, armed with a power that could make him feared by all.
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Well it's just 3 chapter can't say about world building or anything just do your best, too many word to describe learn to simplify the setence it's hard to read and processing the story at same time, make the action and dialoge more than the described surrounding uf this is action nove and try to get more character to support the story if you want to make grand world view
Nice work done. I was first drawn by the title, not synopsis nor cover. Truth be told, it's pretty enjoyable. I don't mind any imperfections when I read, so this is one of the best books I have ever read. The descriptions are clean and picturesque with good character interactions and reactions. Never drop this novel; crafting a novel comes with a lot of challenges, but the best authors are those who overcame them all. I will always be rocking for you. Fighting!
Honest review, pls don’t chase after me. Im not saying the author sucks here, the world building here is amazing, the writing and description is also amazing, characters too early to tell. But i have problems with the plot man… Started out great. I rlly like the build up of this story up till…. [SPOILER ALERT] …. The school entrance arc. The magic system is great with some plot holes in the way it works but since this is very early into the story, honestly, it can be addressed and patched up in the future. (For more detail, I did leave comments under the chapter discussing it) What bugs me more is the way MC gained his power. Maybe this is a me issue because I hate protagonist who just magically gained his power with no sorts of real plot development at all. Although the author is excellent at writing and explaining what happen so the reader can imagine it, their plot points has problem and that’s where it’s hard to continue to read the story. Like MC just went from not knowing how tf magic works to incinerate the entire classroom wall within 10 minutes like what??? OP MC is one thing but 10 minutes of mastering the spell beyond advanced level despite not even having enough mana in the first place. That’s too big of a jump. All thx to the wonderful system. The system is doing the job man, not the MC anymore. So this is where I’m going to back down. I really am not fond of other characters doing the job for the MC. Help him achieving things is one thing but this is not MC’s work anymore. Its the system. You can say that i judge too early cuz some stories slow-burns. However, first impression matters a lot for some people. To me, in order for the impression to last long enough to get to the climax for the slow burn, the flow of the plot up to that point is important.
The author does a great job of getting and keeping the reader's attention or at least mine. Looking forward to seeing how the characters and story develop 👍🏾
Yeah I will be a little shameless and give myself a full 5 star review 😙✌️ well let me introduce myself first your lovely handsome author yeahh i will not say my name but you people can call me diablo... lazydiablo well i am going to start writing this time i will update at least 1 chapter everyday i will give my all this time and won't drop the novel this time and this novel is written by i myself not using any ai or stuff i only used grammar correct from internet so please dont assume that i created anyways i am becoming a writer I don't know why it might be because i was bored or wasn't able to find a novel that i liked preferably you people who are going to read it so i will give you all full power to interfere with it you can recommend me anything that you want to add in this story it might not be necessary that i would put that inside but there are chances and yeahh i can put my fans names as a characters name or you people can recommend any also depends on me anyways thanks for the people who are going to like it and for the people who didn't like it will put more effort next time and of course please be gentle with your comments i am very tender from the heart yours lovely author Lazydiablo😙✌️