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Meet Gladion, a reincarnated individual in the Pokemon world. In his past life, he was just a student and now he's born in Kanto with a burning desire to elevate his beloved grandpa's gym to elite status and become one of the richest person in the whole damn world.
Gladion sets out to transform his family's gem of a gym into the crown jewel of Kanto. His goals? Become a major league gym, rake in the Poké-dollars and have one of the strongest Pokemon team out there.
The story is before Ash goes on his journey but in time it would also include that. Will include anime and the movie events
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This Pokémon fanfic is a masterpiece! The world-building is rich and immersive, far surpassing the anime's scope. The MC is brilliantly written. A must-read for any Pokémon fan!
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I read the first chapter soo far its just being born into the world so it is cliche but good start for the book just hope we get more than 100 chapters
Word count chapter means an automatic 1* for me. Maybe if I actually read it at some point this might go up. Do better.
For those who don't want to read the whole review, I will start with a simple advice. If you love Pokémon anime and think that Ash is the best thing since sliced bread then you should give this novel a read. If you don't? It's more complicated... Writing quality is surprisingly good. Thank God, it's not one of those 'AI assisted' garbage stories that kill your braincells every time you hear something is 'palpable' or a 'testament to smt'. It also isn't an another Chinese Fic and let's leave it at that. Unfortunately that is as far as pros go in my opinion. Technically this is a Reincarnation novel. Author probably really wanted to self insert or give his MC ungodly amount of Pokémon knowledge so he went with Reincarnation. It wouldnt be a problem if he dealt with it better. As is? It's pretty bad. Main character is technically reincarnated and since he was a teenager before his crossing, at this point in the story should be above 20yo. He also, as mentioned has a lot of knowledge. Somehow tho, he is absolutely brainless and unable to think more than 1 step ahead. Not gonna spoil too much but just know that he holds a certain fish Pokémon in an aquarium, inside his closet, while attempting to evolve it (also keeps it a secret from his family). Author sets some rules for Pokémon world but also immediately disregards them for the sake of MCs plans. This might change in the future but as of now, there is absolutely no real training in this novel. MC just had his first fight, which he won thanks to his pokemon evolving while being stomped. He just magically had all the moves without any history of learning them. Oh and another minor spoiler: MC and his sister randomly awaken as an extremely powerful Psychic and ghost power shifted individuals respectively. No training. That's how their "Vortex" family roll. (when I first saw the surname I was hoping it wasn't an Uzumaki reference but then... Well just know that there will be some Naruto fanboying) There are more flaws to this story but this should be enaugh to have an idea if you wanna read this. Good luck.
Reads like it was written by an AI, but the story doesn't have the tag for it. Would like a response from the author to verify. The reason I'm saying this is that I've used AI to write myself for a while and it overuses similar stylistic devices that I see in here. Short chapters, The final line of a chapter is very often a line that says something about looking at the future without adding anything to the story.
Sounds like it's written by AI. I agree with RensT's review. Sadly I didn't read his review before starting. Omg I feel like puking after reading the AI's overly embellished writing and ending of chapter with excessive enthusiasm and hope for the "future". The convos sound fake too and AI tries too much with expressing the emotions. It's really unsettling.
Parece prometedora, son solo 10 capítulos, espero que sea una buena y larga historia. (Si se vuelve mala luego cambio mí reseña)(además estaba de buen humor, no me juzguen).
No futuro, o MC terá uma esposa? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
As of Chapter 5, this story is shaping out to be something amazing. This brings a very interesting take on a more realistic side of the pokemon world. Something of which I've not seen before. Writing quality is solid and its too early to truly rate the character development. Will update in the upcoming future when there's more chapters.