Overlord: The Mummy

The writing quality is ok. I mean better than normal translation fanfic's and readable without hedaches. I like the charakter desing, definitely something new and unique and the powers the mc recives fit well in the concept. A few of the skills are a little bit too op for my taste and make it seem a bit forced. I mean, there is nothing wrong with op skills, but a *100 multiplicator for a level 2 character without doing anithing special is a bit much. Make him op when he reaches lvl 100 and has accumulated a few achievements. dont give him skills equivalent to or even better than momongas " the goal of all live is death " from the beginning. At least that is my opinion.