One Piece: Wielder of the Void

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histidine

well i survived only till chapter 12, my main problem is with the MC and the way he is portrayed and acts. first we have here the typical omnipotent MC route, every one is incompetent and stupid just to highlight how amazing the MC is , he is the strongest fighter in the kingdom (which is a stretch but still within tolerance) , best navigator (never shown to learn it) , knows most about commerce (from the way the dialogs go), knows most about the world of one piece(from the way the dialogs go) and etc, the problem is why make him king if he is the best at everything just make him another mihawk and get done with it but my main problem is his behavior, for example he just got his cargo highjacked and his response is "i dont know where they are so lets just go to the grand line and look around" when he is the king of a kingdom and probably has more important things to do than search blindly , another problem is that he doesnt use his system properly even after presumably having the resources to do so , honestly if you dont intend to use it just dont introduce it from the get go or dont make it an universal mall system but some thing else. basically what you did is like those authors who make the MC too OP and then need to nerf him to keep the story going no foresight at all. at least properly explain the system functions and limitations to the readers so that your MC will not look like he is mentally challenged

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Humbuub

This was interesting but the world background is just bad. For starters author has no idea how the Seas work. He wrote this like all Blue Seas as one big body of water. Bruh South Blue & East Blue is separated by the calm belt and Grandline. Also there's a system, a Universal Mall, but I'm already in ch 16 and we still haven't seen what's inside.

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Elverton_Clarke

Gave up at ch20 as it just got frustrating to read author seems to have no plot in mind as he bounces all over the place . There is a system but its the most useless thing ever and I genuinely feel the mc would be stronger without it as it has so far contributed nothing aside from a starter pack. Also it's apparently ridiculously expensive costing 500 million for a sword manual not even a op sword manual at that just a basic "unique" one . It does not even have any good use outside of that function as he had to pay something like 100 million to identify an unknown devil fruit. Personally I think the author realized that a universal/multiversal shop is kinda op and did not know how to write it and just massively inflated everything that aside the mc is portrayed as "smart" but that just makes him even more frustrating as the author constantly then has him make the most moronic choices then try to give a weak excuse after. also just a pet peeve but 20 chapters it and I still don't know what this mc looks like aside from generic short black hair male

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iamxeno

I am rating myself 5 Star & if you love kingdom-building novels this is for you. I hope you find this interesting.

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Monkey_D_Murda

I’m glad someone decided to do a proper translation for this story…. Thank you

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anubis1650

I like the concept of the story unfortunately there's quite a few inconsistencies and the main character constantly contradicts himself saying to hide the power that they're building but then in the next second displays it openly this happens multiple times in multiple situations. This is just my personal opinion but I always hate it when an MC eats a devil fruit if he has any kind of true Talent(haki for the win) or super power/system it usually just makes it too op for good reading but that like I said that's probably me It just doesn't make sense for me that in a world where it's at least 75% or more of water eating a devil fruit(death by water) unless you truly need it to be powerful which if you have either of the two you don't

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Lizrock

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ACE_KinGz

no wonder your work not getting much view . your mc is totally moroniC OVER CONFIDENT yet getting blast right here and there by enemy only to saved by plot armor . . did you ever read your own work ?? or are that Dumb not to realize ? if I were you I would stop updating this and Drop the whole thing .. it's not worth it to continue

LV 4

Milf_monarch

5-star review after reading 30+ chapters, what I liked most is that MC is intelligent & he knows the consequences of his actions. The system is also rarely used which I like because I don't like a system if it starts interfering too much. I also read your last Fanfiction; thank you for releasing this fanfiction & please don't drop it.

LV 1

ayu_bruemmer

your story development is not interesting haki can only be used by marine captain and above (marienford unit) against weak cp 2 units should win easily except for cp 9 units like rob luci, mc might have a hard time fighting him

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Billy_Agustian17

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FairyCannon

This is an entertaining read, although it is true that there are some errors here and there, but in my humble opinion it does not harm the reading experience.....................................

LV 4

remyma

There's nothing to the story. MC is no king. There's no kingdom building. Just another form of pirate just everywhere but nowhere. After Ch 22, simply gave up.

LV 4

szewei10

Honestly it was going well the idea is good the au is fine but around chapter 90+ the storyline becomes stupid and Mc acts kinda thoughtlessly

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Zaelum

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LevelHeaded_Guy

Great story so far and the writing and story telling in it is great. It doesn't take place in the current era, but I love stories that are like this

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