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Since the beginning, no one has ever stood at the top of the world. Neither you, nor me, not even God himself. But that unbearable vacancy of the throne shall be filled. From this day forth, I will stand at the top of the world.
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Good ideas but you know it's so f****** boring. MC is so f****** OP and lazy story. If it wasn't for One Piece I will give you only one star.
It’s a good story in concept but unfortunately the writing style is a bit of a letdown. Reading it feels like it’s straight from a bad MTL with weird grammar and phrases that you never see in typical English and often make it downright difficult to read or even understand sometimes. If you can get past that it’s just fine aside from the MC being a bit too overpowered for the situation but this certainly isn’t a book worthy of five stars.
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I think this is about like a 2.6 out of five just because it feels bad straight from the gecko. I like Eisen as a character template but the problem is that he's just so overpowered straight from the beginning and I'll admit that it just doesn't feel satisfying there are some overpowered stories where people generally like to read because it's just really balanced well this however is not. it just feels like its going from place to place getting stronger and stronger by beating up people with almost barely any effort.6 for the first flight NFL Saturdays and having a barely at all training now I don't know it's just I just lost interest in reading it very quickly
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Good Overall - Aizen Template - Fight important anime characters to Gain XP - Good MC Character {mid OP} - Acts as Aizen would - Starts at Training Academy for 10 chapters and Doesn't hide his abilities and then roams the world for 1 year to gain XP.
Very interesting as an idea and especially in the use of such a calculating and obviously cool character! Keep it up man!!! Waiting for more chapters!!!
it's a Mtl the only difference is the MC name is different and of course the title but it's the same
imma keep it real i dropped the book cause his name is alex most generic name someone could think of i swear
Main character is reincarnated into one piece with a template and makes the best
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This story has a lot of potential. I like the way the story is going and the fact the mc is a marine and hopefully he can become fleet admiral and take the marines away from the world goverment. The author is a good story teller and I look forward to reading more
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It is so goooooood. aizen is just what it should be .and power system is also good and i just love it. well grammer is bad but still readable . i hope you dont drop it. Please upload more chapters.
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