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Year 1491 of the Sea Calendar, A few years after the disbandment of the Rocks Pirate Crew, the sea was in a state of turmoil.
Charlotte, who had always been discreet and cautious, was forced to embark on a pirate adventure, gathering strength to grow the Hiberfield family and forge a legend on the sea.
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Reading the story, I think it is translated; translated well. At least, only mistranslation was gender for last four chapters😅, that too for the mc and no one else. So far, the story is quite interesting for a translated fan fiction. A unique idea too, with the starting point at new world. If the translator/Author could keep the right gender, then it's quite good. keep it up 🤠👍🏽
1. Continuity in the novel is intermittent. For example, when the hero of the novel begins training his assistants, he finishes the training, and everyone he trained has become masters of the technique in which they were trained. The novel is an expression of a beginning and an end, and there is no process in the middle. The novel makes you feel that it is a summary more than it is a novel. 2 The gender of the protagonist varies from one chapter to the next, sometimes male and sometimes female. 3. The hero of the novel does not have an important presence in the novel. His mission is to defeat powerful enemies to show his presence in the novel and to talk sarcastically about his character being cautious and that he wants to live in peace and prosperity and problems come to him. This is all I have about the hero of the novel because there is nothing else about him. 4 The translation is bad In the details and there is no editing. Overall, the novel is considered third-rate. Frankly, it does not suit me. The theme or idea of the novel is good, but the execution is very bad. If you want a similar novel but it is better in all aspects, you can search for a novel called (Vongola Primo in One Piece).
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