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A young man tranmigrated to 9 year old boy in one piece world. will he survive in this cruel world when strong eat the weak? will he find happyness in the vast sea?
"I will become strong to protect what i have"
"I will find happyness in this cruel sea"
"No matter how big chalenge come to me, i will face it even if it from world governor if they tried to take away family i have in this world!"
English is not my mother tongue so bear with it and tell me if there grammar error and i will try to fix it.
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Hey, I'm gonna give you suggestions and take them to heart or not, but I recommend making the stories shorter but have more progression like, "At the time of when he got into the forest he started to look around", not the best writer my self or at all just a suggestion other than that keep it up
this is author. i hope you like my story