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A painter named Yarold loves to paint more than anything else does in the world.
The problem? He had already painted all the places he thought were interesting. He began to look at fantasy works, but this was not enough, he wanted to walk and see those places with his own eyes, it was an impossible dream.
One day he died of a mistake from God.
Yarold's dream of being able to paint all the islands of One Piece was no longer so impossible.
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— This is my first novel.
— My English is bad. English is not my first language.
— The original work is by Oda.
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It's a decent fan fic with an interesting premise. Sadly i had to stop at ch54 (not of the chap itself tho, or well sort of?) I started reading it and it was alright, bit weird-ish but interesting. The only thing i dind't really like was the mc, no real problems with him tho. Kept on reading and found out the MC is basicly a pshycopath,even humans have a limit on being selfish, the mc doesn't. This turned to be a problem for me eventually, he's too focused on painting and doesn't care about anything else... he's one dimensional with a ****ty attitude. The fanfic did try to make misunderstanding but idk why i dind't find it funny most of the time. World building is alright i guess? I can give it a pass... not too descriptive but enough i suppose. Story development is a pass, it develops in the way the novel was intended. Update stability is a tricky one, 2 chap a week, you can call it a lot or not... Writing quality is good enough, it's understandable but there are grammatical errors. Characters design, like i said... i don't like the mc and it killed the story for me. Everyone else is alright tho. The fan fic is average, so neither bad or good. I suggest to give it a try who read the.. review? this far, maybe you don't mind a egocentric mc with a tunnelvision.
I love the concept...an SI who is an artist with the art DF...fucking OP...but why such ****ty rating........the damn MC.....dude had a child and pregnant wife and yet the ass neglected them ... yes this is fiction but **** is ****...MC is garbage...plus read half of chp 2 and well its ****............point is,,,,,a re-write...pls with a better MC,,,,,,this would be so dope.....I really do hope this is re-written instead of this ****
I haven't read this yet but after reading the reviews... Well, I'll definitely give it a try. Author created the most realistic MC who was so driven towards his goal that he abandoned his pregnant wife. Yeah, that was absolutely terrible. But, it's also a very realistic scenario that may be happening in our world more than we know. Reading about a nerdy otaku MC with no life or a super genius is getting kinda boring. So, I'm just showing my support for the story. The rating may change later depending on how much I like it.
Review of the first volume. I like the protagonist, but I can understand why it was not liked. People watch anime, read manga and novels to detach themselves from reality. Seeing as MC a person who makes a heavy but real gesture doesn't make much sense. So subjectively I really like the way of doing the MC, but objectively I find it not very suitable for a novel, especially One Piece. As a loving choice I hope you don't choose the usual ones. From the last chapters of the first volume I think I choose mysha, but I sincerely hope in Perona.
A beautiful novel. The protagonist is real and well-caraterrified. The story is funny. Recommended. Also recommended for those who don't know One Piece.
Writing Quality: 3/5. Quality of the writing remained similar. Improvement in certain chapters but basic level. Understandable. 3.5 / 5 I would like to put 4 stars, thanks to the author's thoughts and the extra, which I find very nice ideas. Stability of Updates: 5/5. Small deterioration compared to the beginning. The correct mark is 4.5. I don't want you to publish based on readers' needs, you must like it, don't rush. The important thing is that you warn, which you are doing. Story Development: 4/5. Improvement compared to the initial chapters, but still nothing surprising. Before it was more a 3.5, now I can put four stars without much difficulty. Character Design: 4/5. I really loved the new characters, especially their description in the extra chapter. I'd like to put five but I hate the protagonist too much. World Background: 5/5. Which has improved most of all throughout the story. New places not present in the original story and explained well enough in the extra. Five stars because this and the characters created from zero are the I look at most in a fiction. The real vote would be a 4/5, since not all the details of these places are present.
Panda like the story so far, but the prologue of leaving a family really sucks. But new life new goals so Panda hope that he continues in his belief and don't get married or find a love life until he finish his goals.
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Good novel. But probably won't finish reading it like other novels. The first 2 chapters some people may not like but its good character design. Some people like to follow there dreams, but when they have a kid they just give up on it. But this character followed his dream until the end and i like it. I will probably get hate from people who hated the first chapter.
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I havent read it but the image cover is weirdly creepy for some reason like an old creepy pasta on a windows 1
I rewrote this review. This is for 2 main reasons. 1- I don't want to publish multiple reviews just to explain one thing. 2- To warn that I have to re-edit the chapters. They pointed out to me that using styles other than the classic one, it could lead to visual errors. History will not change. I apologize if you will see (?) Or strange squares ... I will try to solve as soon as possible. And now repost the old review. --- Since everyone does it, who am I to break this tradition? Self-review! I like the story! Obviously, since I'm writing it. I know my grammar is not the best. I know that five stars are too many. For those who have just started or are planning to start, I am modifying the chapters slightly. They don't change anything in history, so you don't have to reread them. Enjoy the reading. If you are looking for a well-written work or a harem, this story is not for you. If you are looking for a story where the protagonist is a hero who saves and helps everyone, don't start reading.