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When Neo was 16 his bestfriend, Lia was killed by a truck. And now his siblings were almost killed by the same looking truck. But he won't let that fucking truck kill anyone close to him again. He pushed his siblings away from the truck, killing him in the process. Only to wake up in a unfamiliar place.
WARNING! Im a starting author! I wanted to make this Novel because I was bored and wanted to try it myself!
The cover is not mine
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Yeah I forgot to write a review on this, i would've wrote this a month ago. So let's start, first the story is quite well written and is honestly going in the right path, the world background while cliche (obviously it's a multiverse fanfic herdurrduurrr) is written to the point where it doesn't feel all that cliche and is actually intriguing to read and think about, character development one word interesting, two words above average, three words better than expected, Now for everyone's favorite discussable thing, or peeve depending who you are, grammar! Eh, it's good enough.
Ma wang : 5/5 update : 5/5 Mc : 4/4(just because there only 4 soul) for TG arc : 6/6 Overall : 5.0 so in the end , i will say that this novel is good
the writing quality is good its just why does mine had an ad in it? I'm not sure if its just me or for all people..............................
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i feel conflicted about this fanfic on one side i like this fanfic because the quality is superb but i don't like two person in one body mc because imo it's look like ntr and i don't know if if the two person will merge into one in the future or not.