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For some unknown reason a useless piece of human being was given a second chance, even though he should go straight to hell.
Reborn in the Naruto world that in his previous life was only just fiction, now it has become reality he lives on.
Read his journey who want to become better human for himself and his surroundings.
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Short chapter until it gradually increase in chapter 9 up, I don't know it was that short.
My first time writing we shall see how it goes (+_+)
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Read five chapters and found out it’s a system fanfic wasted ten mins of my life in not going to get back.
don't ask why this Dio gave you this rating. you just have failed to entertain this Dio!
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I like how mc is not op and how much its writes simple things like how realistic mc. He is not strong and shows how his is training. its true that its slow but nahh I dont care about this.
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man this novel is good although writing quality and sentence being cheesy the story overall is very good I too am a some what use less person just need the determination to overcome my
the concept is great but dialoges and overall it's bad writing needs to be improved his interaction are also not good, overall it's like I'm writing the book but I'm not good at writing at all
Se você e um adolescente que não tem paciência e precisar ver o protagonista humilhando alguém com sua força em menos de 20 capítulos e mostrando como ele e bom, isso aqui provavelmente não e pra você.
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Very good, you can read a lot. The people who keep giving low reviews for no reason at all. . . .
Boring. It has grammar mistakes here and there, then there is this constant use of 'gonna' which is annoying af. 50 chapters of... nothing, they're too short and it's already showing signs of a dumb story. Him being like a big brother to Naruto and others, saying stuff he shouldn't say, system shop (with passives? only), random pet out of nowhere and more that I can't be bothered to remember. The novel could've been amazing if the author bothered a little more.
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Hahahahahaha!!!!!!! Is that fuiking Eren in Gai's sweat drip!? Anyway I haven't read the fic yet but fire pic though😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥