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Naruto: The Medical Shinobi
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A scientist embarks on a quest to become a medical ninja, inventor, and businessman after being reincarnated as an orphan into the Naruto-verse.
Since English is not my first language and I am a novice writer, I sincerely apologise for any errors. No NSFW content will be there.
I will give you a heads-up and apologise in advance that the first five chapters are a little tedious and move slowly, but they are crucial to the plot because they set the stage for him to inherit his abilities.
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Slow but still enjoyable. The powers are unique and character is well defined. Loved the Fujin reference from The wind calamity. The author is clearly new to writing and has long way to go. But still very good start.
Author's shameless five star review: As the author of this fan fiction, I'm incredibly proud of the work I've put into this story. Although the first few chapters were undoubtedly rough and poorly written, my writing skills are getting better every day. Please note that I am not a native English speaker and that this is my first story. The ability to blend character development with world-building is something I've strived for throughout this story. The slow-paced nature of the early chapters allows readers to truly connect with the main character and understand his motivations. As the story progresses, I have no doubt that I will deliver thrilling action sequences and heart-wrenching moments. If you're a fan of character-driven narratives and epic storytelling, this fan fiction is a must-read. My dedication to crafting a compelling world and complex characters is evident in every page. I can't wait to see where this story takes us next! Ideas and suggestions are welcomed in the comments section of the chapters. Spoiler Alert. .. .. . . . . I do not want the main character of my story to walk the same path as other stories, so there will be no Shadow clones spamming. The main character will be building his ninja skills and, in parallel, will be working towards improving technology in the world. He will be establishing a company in his name when he is in his 1st year of the academy. Please be patient with me as I pace the story slowly until then.
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full of shit full of cringe full of bullshit. 13 ch in and it is still day 1 of being reincarnated .every single instance, every signal paragraph doesn't make any sense .the Mc is cipletly and utterly hopeless moron. the writer has a masochist knack .the story is so childish it make the filler chapter at the Start of Naruto very serious .it like the writer is trying to write a horror story for 5 year old children.🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Ahhg they are going in circles asking the same question but using different tones and sentences please Make! it! Stop!!!. It took me a while to reach a conclusion that skipping 3-6 won't make much of a difference and I Was Right!!!
Author I get the starting is a bit slow and everything. But you have to understand, in this platform the first few chapters are the deciding factor to continue or not. He is an adult before dying, so his mentality at the beginning of his transmigration seems a little childish. Maybe previous memories might affect them but still he has many mind related perks, so it should be controllable. He is a scientist so making his character more logical and calculating type won't change the course. Overall a good story, intriguing but need to read further to get interesting. Hope you all the best Author.
It is well-written and the unique and well-researched abilities make it refreshing from the repetitive uchiha/senju OC you normally see. It makes me feel like there is a strong foundation for development with limitless potential, especially if you get creative. interested to see where it goes. I would say however that the beginning before the reincarnation is unnecessarily long and would most likely put some people off so it may be worth editing it and trimming it down in my opinion. A more relevant image and detailed synopsis would also go a long way 🫡 keep up the good work Mr Author
with this story pace you will burn out pretty fast! too much water. you know Naruto, he knows naruto, we knows naruto so you can just skip most unnecessary explanations. at this pace if you ever try to finish this work it will take trice more chapters than original work. too dramatic without any movement.
i am writing this comment after reading chapter 41. I am not saying that the story is bad , it has certain vibe in it,also more realistic but its too slow , boring , and has too much negativity currently{ maybe positivity will come later part in the story }. leans on too much modern medical and scientific side (can be gessed from the name of the novel ) , so much medical and scientific view gives me a headache as its naruto world which leans on supernatural side. so its's not my type of story. i hope author doesn't see my comment as discouragement as its only my view.
This story sounds amazing and very interesting and I love the way the characters interact with the Mc and his abilities.[img=update]
Muy buena novela, sigue así autor 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋❤️
The story is good and has potential but I think he's a little naive he was thrust into the spotlight too early, with no strength to defend himself. I hope he does business with the Daimyō to protect himself and make money from his inventions. By the way, this photo is not pretty
It's a good idea, the bases are well written, I can't say yet that it's a good story because it's still at the bases (Chapter 35), it has a different idea than what I'm used to and that's good. It has a future and I hope it's not abandoned. The only "failed " is that it is slow-paced, which is not bad in itself, but eventually almost all slow-paced stories are abandoned because the author lost motivation, so it is not a criticism but more of a fear.
It is with unwavering determination that i am writing this review I would really love if the author could tell me what AI you are using so I can support it as I am sure that that patron does not go to it as this is mostly describing everyone like a passage from chap 15 his grandfather says the family is in the crafting business and then it's like upon hearing dans words a sense of connection enveloped ryu a bond forged through a shared passions and traditional family legacies reflecting on his own past life as an incentive soul entering the workshop gave him nostalgia ryu was happy to find a place like this in his new home there was something similar in his home in the past he found a new connection with his new grandfather he made a mental note to ask him to teach him crafting and thats just one paragraph many more like this so if you like this kind of thing give it a read as i don't it's always the same with so and so determination or with great passion i cant stand it myself
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really good love the story, it's long and takes time to build mc's strength and explain the world background which gor me is a good ol w
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This novel is great! Although the ‘intro’ before the reincarnation takes place is a bit long, it is detailed and sets the stage for the story really well. The MC is likable and the direction the story is going with is intriguing. As of now, the story hasn’t progressed far but still, I’m hooked. Keep up the good work!