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33.33% Naruto FanFiction: A Drastic Change / Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Starting Over (Prologue)

Capítulo 1: Chapter 1: Starting Over (Prologue)

It's quite a mystery how things work and turn out. He had died, how and why honestly didn't matter at all, the fact remained the same: He was dead, and there was no changing that what so ever. However, if he had to be honest, the opportunity granted to him was simply too good to refuse, although, he did change a few things. It was a classic, yet cliché reincarnated into the Elemental Nations, or better known as Naruto World, though as previously stated, he himself changed the rules a bit.

First of all, he was an avid reader of the Naruto Fanfiction world, and had chewed through quite a few. He would admit to being a huge fan of the series, yet at the same time, a very furious hater, at how the entirety of the series played out. Naruto had potential in droves, yet it appeared the entire time that everyone that was supposed to help him, simply set him aside for no apparent reason, and that made his blood boil.

There was too many hypocritical actions, for example the Third Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi, a man that had vowed to protect all in the hidden leaf, yet failed miserably at helping young Naruto. Not wanting to show favoritism, he refused to help the young boy, leading to him showing favoritism to everyone but the boy himself. You see, nobody bothered to help the shinobi in training, stopping him for a second to say "Hey, kid, you have too much chakra to do the Clone Jutsu, you are literally killing your clone with the amount of Chakra you put in." To put it into perspective, if the Clone Jutsu was a cake recipe, and it asked for 5 spoons of sugar, young Naruto put in the equivelant of 50 spoons of sugar. And yet nobody told him this, leaving the boy to fail not once, but twice, simply due to the neglect and stupidity of those around him. Not to mention the very fact that the boy struggled with anything involving the civilians, due to their misplaced hatred.

Next up was his first "sensei" - Hatake Kakashi, the beloved student of Narutos father, Namikaze Minato, more affectionately known as the Yondaime Hokage. In all of his time under Kakashi, Naruto only learned the chakra control excercise, Tree Climbing. If you waited for more, look no further, that was all he learned. Kakashi was more focused on the "genius" of his students, Uchiha Sasuke, later on completely refusing Narutos plea for training during the promotional exam, known as the Chuunin Exam, in order to train Sasuke, teaching said boy the Technique 'Chidori', which was later shoved through Narutos chest, because it turned out that Sasuke had severe issues, becoming an Avenger after his brother tortured him in a powerful genjutsu, causing Sasuke to watch Itachi kill their parents over and over for 72 hours with no rest. Yet there was no apparent counceling done for the boy, leaving him with severe mental problems.

Third we have a three year training trip, under the powerful Jiraya, one of the Legendary Sannin, the teacher of Narutos father. Three years, and all he learned was: Instead of charging in 11/10 times, only charge in 9/10 times, slightly better control, and how not to wear traffic cone orange clothes that would haunt even the haunted, and kill those who was already killed.

So, you are now probably wondering, what were the changes that were being talked about? Well, let's dive in, there would be a few changes done, it would be a parralel world to the original, following the same basic script, albeit minor changes, such as: Naruto taking more after his father, being extremely clever and talented with his mothers willpower gone supercharged.

He would do something that was very rarely seen, and quite honestly unheard of. Instead of starting entirely from scratch, our dead reincarnator went for a setup that allowed him to rise to power quickly, and solidly, all in order to give Naruto the training and family he deserved, hence he changed the world like mentioned. He had picked the bloodline of Otsutsuki, for all round power since they were 'the progenitors'.

He had decided upon his new name, when he would arrive, how long he would train to be ready, and when he would start his plans.

Otsutsuki Hanra, arrived at the age 16, just as Minato and Kushina was impaled by the Kyuubi, Kurama.


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