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My personal multiverse travel system
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I died.
Guilty?
Mr. Truck, of course.
I met a god, and he gave me a system, and he told me:
- I do this for fun, so have fun too.
-Well, since you insist.
When Sophie is given the chance to reincarnate a multi verse system in exchange for entertaining the heavens, she doesn't think twice and accepts.
New worlds, new friends, freedom, and who knows, maybe a reverse harem. If the boys can, why can't I?
NT: I will start with Soman Chainani's School of Good and Evil as the first world, this is my first job, so I accept constructive criticism, tomatoes and all kinds of opinions.
English is not my mother tongue.
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The story is interesting, and the protagonist really breathed new life into the world, with her being much more interesting than the original Shopie compared to the movie. I haven't read the books so my opinion is based on the movie. The big problem with this fanfic is the bad grammar, with basic errors that end up being very frustrating and disturbing the reading. If it wasn't a fanfic I would absolutely give it a bad grade just for the grammar, but I'm not usually picky with fanfics. The synopsis and the tags and cover could also be better worked on, the author doesn't seem to be very interested in attracting readers, however this is not something that directly affects the plot so I'm not giving a bad score for something like that. In general it is a very interesting read for those who are not bothered by bad grammar, however for those who do not support grammatical problems I do not recommend this fanfic as it will really be an extremely frustrating read.