My Miss Fortune System

LV 3

Poor_Wordsmith

Maybe the Name and the Person you need MC to find is The lady named Sarah Fortune also known as Miss Fortune... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

LV 2

PSE666

"That's actually a nice story! It starts slowly but smoothly, the writing is simple but effective. I would recommend to anyone to give it a try as it is well writing and managed! Good luck to the author!

LV 3

RedAdam04

Wonderful story! The writing quality is still good. The stability of updates looks normal. But still, the story development needs improvement. There are a lot of things that needed to fix like grammar. The author is completely aware of his/her limit and she/he puts a lot of effort to establish a good storyline so far. I highly recommend to the editors to check this.

LV 1

Cerealord

Writing Quality is good but is over all presented in a awkward manner, Update Stability isn't set in a fixed state and is seem to be done on a whim as updates occur from 1 chapter every 3 days to 1 chapter every 20 days though I would like to add that they seem to be trying to get into a schedule of 1 every 3 days and it seems that they are either doing this for fun or improving their English (So don't bash them to hard). Story Development although unique is still very cliché and straight forward which can be good but only if done right but it still doesn't make it un-readable. Character Design seems to be done without much thought and there characters seem overly simplified and just seem to be slaves to the plot and don't have much thought of their own. World Background isn't explained much could be just because it's to early for them to introduce any of it or they just have no plans to introduce it at all but the author did take time to think of a power ranking system to be put in the world in the auxiliary volume so extra props for that. 3.6/5 Overall Review: It's not great It has a comedic charm to it Writing Quality is decent. Update Stability is bad but seems to be improving. Story Develops in a predictable cliché way It's hard to find anything to appreciate about that. Character design other than the comedic charm (Which I'm not a fan of) is to put it bluntly pretty bad. World Background is by far the best as we see the author has taken the time to construct the 'levels' of the world. Note to the author: Thousands of people are reading your work so people obviously like your stories and my suggest is if you want to get better is to take your time with your work and I guess keep being you so you don't lose that charm. I'm just a idiot so you shouldn't take my words to seriously as I'm by no means qualified to give you advice this is just what I think about your novel.

LV 10

KacbRe

I really like the novel, when reading it the reading is very easy to understand and simple, I am also very interested in the story, I recommend this novel for those who want to read casually without going through difficult sentences.

LV 3

uvp87459

The story is good. Other people should appreciate this more. It's a slowpace so kinda get boring sometimes. But overall everything's good so keep the good work going author.

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Jose_Pereira_6962

Well the premise is amazing and the story has a lot of potential unlike many other stories on this site the progression of the story is kinda slow but that's good in this case by the way that part of the contract with the devil ends up going wrong later on and ends up becoming a very funny thing in chapter 128

LV 10

Riku_Wing

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