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My life with you after marriage(completed)

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Autor: daisylaisy

4.32 (10 Avaliações)

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A short story of a couple after their marriage .

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WARNING !!!!

Matured content ... read at your own risk .

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This is my second novel , try reading my first novel if possible .

The name is , sinful moments.

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jmbrianafenis

I read this short story for 3x ....this is simple but interesting....once youve done reading you want to read it again....how i wish i ciuld read more novel written by you author.....

5yr
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jampong19

Its pretty good all the quality for a novel is here. I want to read some more especially what will aaron do now that he knows steve is not his rival at eve

5yr
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uefuef
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Nice love story between childhood friend, with some misunderstanding. I like the author's style on bringing up the issue to solving, simple but meaningful

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lassie2019

There is lot of potential thus the 3 ratings, otherwise, real reviews would have been much much l lower. Found this after a moments decision yo read a completed short read, title was catchy and being one to read not basing on reviews alone gave it a shot. The first few pages gave a rambling of words which makes it boring sad to say, adding to the absence of appropriate marks makes it to hectic and tiring to read. But nevertheless, maybe the writer wrote it in one shot, maybe the writer just rambled on with his or her thoughts was going through my mind. But the base is there, a very good novel if work is put into this will probably produce a very nice read. Hope the writer will work on this and not merely dwell on the smut part but be able to grow as a novelist

5yr
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daisylaisy

Shamelessly I'm giving review to my own novel 😂 This is short story which I wrote and completed it today 👅. I just hooopppeee you guys love it and tell about my story 🙊 To all the people who tried reading my novel thanks a lotttt💘

5yr
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xiosssshhi

loved it!!! 😘😘😘😘😘❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️🥰🥰🤩🤍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️

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3yr
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mshahwar

The story was good sweet and short but I want a whole book with more chapters 😭😭😭 I really loved the book author. Wanany books like this!

5yr
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ReaderBug

Good one and I liked it...!!!!! Can be finished in one go. Since it is short and sweet...!!!!!

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Daoist478249

The writing quality is poor; their marriage lacks respect, patience and kindness. Sex seems to be the only thing that the couple have in common. There's no tenderness and tolerance.

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Lady_Ale

The Story is short and cute ❤ I wish the chapters were long with more cute scenes 😁 childhood love 💯💘 I hope you continue writing more novels with long cheaters next time 😘

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