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Multiversal Elden Ring Mercant

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Autor: Theon_Bennit

3.95 (15 Avaliações)

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Sinopse

What happens to an obsession once someone dies? Some may fade away, some may eat at your soul for all eternity.

Some, however, are so strong they can warp reality itself.

A man obsessed with Elden Ring to the point of challenging this universes laws, what kind of story would that be I wonder?

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VirginYoungMaster

hate it if there's too many "----" dash... playing it on audio books sucks. and there's a lot of author do that and I hate cause you just hear "DASHDASHDASH dash dash dash" forever ...

1yr
Ver 7 Respostas
Yunick

the first few chapters were very good 5 stars but after that the author go full paranoid mode and decides to throw oveboard the mercant concept and the mc´s needs to level up killing enemies in other worlds like the other fanfics where the mc has an ER or DS system in other worlds. personally i think the author problem were his goals, he put some power stone goals for extra chapters and he always reached it so he rushed the chapters without thinking, you should take your time while writing if you want to write good stuff.

12mth
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Lin_Asora

the story starts out great with some room of improvement but now the newest chapters just feel like it's been jumping all over the place plot has fallen and the storyline has dropped significantly

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1yr
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DoppelGanger09

So I dropped this originally due to the sharp left turn it took away from the original premise. That was until I saw a bunch of chaps go missing and read the AN, And Ill say, its like the difference between night and day. I have not ever seen such a 180 turn in my life. now it is too early to really tell if this is going to remain on track this time but as of right now I am very much enjoying the rewrite so far.

12mth
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NeaCambelt

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1yr
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Zero_Five_7869

I will rate again after I read it, I love elden ring

1yr
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Dylan_Perkins

I like it so far but I'll wait till there's at least 10 chapters before I change my review. It's looking promising, so keep up the good work.

1yr
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12mth
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DaoistdAPAxL

Honestly, I've been dying to read a merchant story that is actually worth reading. And you are amazing my fine fellow. Keep this pacing up, this story has amazing potential.

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12mth
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Blake_Langton

I like it, especially after the Radahn fight where it went back to merchant stuff. Can’t wait for more chapters

12mth
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Giga_Weeb

i am gigaweeb, purveyor of fine novels. read this.

1yr
Ver 2 Respostas
Anderson_

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1yr
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GramGeb
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written well. sticks to characters personalities well. personally I hope theirs no harem. not saying he couldn't have a fling with a few characters but it's done way to often and it's not needed for a good story. overall it's an awesome read please don't stop writing it. super enjoyable.

1yr
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Slik_lvl

Вначале был интересно читать произведение, концепция о торговце предметами из елден ринга интересно, но реализация ужасна. Я незнаю почему после первых глав фанфик превратился непонятно во что, арены с боссами, убийство капитанов готея, драки на ровном месте, какие душевные разговоры с айзеном. Это работа мне напоминает те работы авторы которых даже не хотят писать и делают просто на отъебись. Нету сюжета, нету целостности истории. Это отталкивает, ещё куски пересказа оригинальных работ, фальшивые главы которые созданы для скама сайта. Зато автор сука завел патреон, ну ахуеть теперь. Работу скипаю, читать стало тяжело из-за автора который топит свою работу.

1yr
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