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A guy wins a chance to gain wishes by ROB like everyone dreams to the world of MHA with wishes which may not be OP or are they?
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Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
Authors shameless self review, just screw yourselves.Authors shameless self review, just screw yourselves.Authors shameless self review, just screw yourselves.
voce tem aumentar a frequencia de postagem de capitulos autor e um pouco da contagem de palavras, um poucos mais de -18 mais interaçoes rormanticas entre o harém, e por favor quando a eri ficar mais velha coloca ela no harém, gostei do cross- sobre que voce fez aproveita isso e joga as vilas tambem para parar com aquela frescura de nao matar vilas
A very weak start, but it is gradually gaining momentum. The main character's quirk is cool, the characters are at least well written. I would like to advise the author not to listen to the guys demanding a harem. He already has 2 girls and this is more than enough, please the author, do not add more! That's enough. I won't say that in Japan, you definitely won't have a harem. But since this is just fan fiction, and taking the world of the Hero Academy, you can close your eyes. But still, no parent would allow their daughters at 15 to live with his boyfriends. Moreover, none of the parents will want to give their daughters to the Harem. Even if the main character is extremely successful in the future. One must accept the fact that the world of the hero academy takes place in a modern society. This is not the 15th-18th century, where the harem was commonplace. I wrote all this so that the author would not add a harem. But who am I?! Well, I hope at least the girl won't tell him. You're too tough, we need some support! The dumbest excuse for a harem).
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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Nice nice nice nice. ... Very nice. .. .put midnight and ryukyo too in his harem. ...Make him able to help toru the invisible girl to control her power and be in his harem too. ..Because many fanfic say that toru is beautiful
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voce tem aumentar a frequencia de postagem de capitulos autor e um pouco da contagem de palavras, um poucos mais de -18 mais interaçoes rormanticas entre o harém, e por favor quando a eri ficar mais velha coloca ela no harém, gostei do cross- sobre que voce fez aproveita isso e joga as vilas tambem para parar com aquela frescura de nao matar vilas
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voce tem aumentar a frequencia de postagem de capitulos autor e um pouco da contagem de palavras, um poucos mais de -18 mais interaçoes rormanticas entre o harém, e por favor quando a eri ficar mais velha coloca ela no harém, gostei do cross- sobre que voce fez aproveita isso e joga as vilas tambem para parar com aquela frescura de nao matar vilas
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Alright it went to a great start it was all great proceeding like a chapter later he’ s all knowing the way it’s paced Is terrible also all the love is anyoing it’s forced flirting in 0 ways does it seem “realistic” It seemes like it was written by a 12 year old
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hello author I helped you with my 5 beads I gave you 6 stones: D I hope you like it, post more chapters <3 hello author I helped you with my 5 beads I gave you 6 stones: D I hope you like it, post more chapters <3
The premise is awesome and all but God,the relationship progression?it went from 0-100 real fast.like they've barely known each other for a day and boom the i love you came out of nowhere...like what?....and the mc is like giving off Pervy bakugou vibes...''hmmm...jiro looked good, I just ''might" consider "adding"her to my harem.........I mean no offence ,your creativity is good but ...uuh relationship -wise?slow down a little....yeah?