Mecenarys Oath:TEST

This is a test of a story I want to make but I’m a beginner and don’t really have time because of work so don’t expect anything.
The synopsis is just a outline of the first part of the plot.

SYNOPSIS:
Theodore Kain, a man who seeks to live a normal life after his rebirth, only to have his world shattered when his parents are killed by a group of mercenaries at the age of 5. Fueled by grief, Theodore's dormant system awakens, granting him power for a singular purpose: REVENGE.