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The Marvel universe is an incredible place. An average man with no aspirations wanted nothing more than to live there. He wanted his own power where it truly had meaning. He always felt there was no meaning in a world where anybody could be killed by a gun. Marvel has so many people that it would take a nuclear explosion to kill and more even more powerful. He is a man who wants his own empire, his own place to rule. A place where he has say and power, where no one can hurt him. A place where there is meaning to his life. He will do anything to become stronger. He does not want to become a petty hero or villain. No, he wants to be king.
I don't own marvel. OC, SI
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To the Author. Decided to put a review simply to give what I consider a good advice. Dialogue and interractions between characters of Ancient One and MC feels very artificial. When you talk to someone you do not explain everything, give answers to everything and say everything you know. Your dialogue feels like a rehearsed scene with overly detailed explanation, preemptive answers to all possible questions and structured like legalesse or teacher trying to explain slightly challenging topic to young kids. People even if they wish to say everything and anything that’s on their mind cannot do so simply because some are not articulate enough, some are too emotional and most do not know what whoever they are talking to are thinking or feeling. Or it could be because they don’t have the time to think and formulate their answers ;) People do not have time to think like you do, in front of the computer to reply. It’s dialogue, it’s spontaneous, even if both parties came to the discussion with their own script.
So far it's been great, can't wait for future chapters. Main character has actually used his brain which makes it better than most novels here. Very fast pace so far
excellent book I enjoyed the chapters so far and FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!! go me oh yeah I'm so good .,.,.....,.,..,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,..
Quite an enjoyable read, hoping to see this continue and not be dropped like so many others that write about the marvel universe and the way his power doesn't have to rely on gods is nicely well done
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I liked this story sad to see its no longer being updated..................................................................................................
I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story.
Untapped with huge potential, I really hope u continue with it.................... Mmmmmm. Mm.... The wait for the next chapter. ....... ....
I just want more, go on please.............................................................................................................................................................
amazing start and it was very much enjoyable. looking forward to the future chapters.......................................................................................................................................................................................
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I need more. This is so good. I need more. This is so good.I need more. This is so good.I need more. This is so good.I need more. This is so good.
Awesome!!!! Never drop this fic ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Revelar Spoiler This is so good. Excellent chapter and story. I am very excited to read this story. This is so good. Excellent chapter and story. I am very excited to read this story.
there isn't alot out so far but I'm loving what your doing so far and can't wait to see what you are going to do with this story. I'm hoping this doesn't get dropped because there aren't that many good authors that seem to have a good direction of what to do with it. but this seems to be something that can actually go somewhere, and not just die off because someone is doing it half-heartedly.
a good start... has lot of potential... don't drop it! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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The Story has great potential and the Author has Fully tapped onto it . It somewhat reminds me of " The Spider " which is one of my favourite Marvel Fanfics . Just Don't Drop It Author , I'll Love To read the coming chapters .