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Arthur wakes up in a S.H.I.E.L.D. recruit's body in the Marvel universe, discovering a hidden "Template System" that grants him powers of Gojo Satoru from Jujutsu Kaisen.
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Premature but I enjoyed the 2 chapters hopefully you find someway to get him even stronger cause Gojo might be strong in his verse but marvel oh boy. But keep up the good work so far can’t wait to read what happens next.
I don't really leave reviews that often but I read a lot of fics and I can tell this one has a lot of potential. I do have some constructive criticism that I think could help make your story better. The beginning of the novel is kinda vague, like we don't know how the protagonist was sent to the Marvel world or how he got his powers (other than it came from a system). I don't think that's necessarily wrong though as a little mystery can be good as long as there is a pay off for it later in the story. Though I'd say the weakest link of this fic is the protagonist. There's nothing inherently wrong with him but there's nothing that particularly stands out either. Give him a more unique personality or some type of flaw or eccentricity. Just don't make him a carbon copy of Gojo, make him his own charater. Another thing is that the protagonist lacks a clear defined goal, I know it's still early in the story and it's possible that you just haven't revealed it yet but it's very important. Honestly even if you didn't do any of what I said, I still think this is a pretty good fanfic and worth reading. Overall, I think you're doing a great job, especially for a new writer. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Highly recommend to those who likes fame based system and honesty one of my favourites on this whole app.
É boa,mas podia diminuir as descrições floridas,vc podia curar a viúva negra também,de resto tá bom ...................................... .... .............................
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I know this novel is not perfect, but I am confident that it will improve over time with continued effort and refinement. I am eager to receive your feedback and suggestions on how to enhance the story, characters, and overall narrative.