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Capítulo 1: the princess of hell

As you walk around, hell, you're stumble across somebody who's awfully cheery and she walks up to you and ask you

???: Are you new here?

Dan:y-yeah

???: would you like to come to my hotel? We're trying to rehabilitate sinners.

Dan: Have you rehabilitated any before?

???: well no but it's better than just Romeo Brown the middle of nowhere

Dan: My name is dan

???: oh Where's my manners?

Charlie: I'm Charlie Charlie MorningStar

Dan: The daughter of Lucifer MorningStar?

Charlie: yep

Dan:well om

Charlie: OK, let's go

Charlie takes you back to the hotel and introduces you to

vaggie Charlie's girlfriend.

niffy The maid.

alastor One of the overlords.

husk The bartender and.

Angel dust The porn star.

Charlie gives you a key to your room and as you relaxing your bed, Charlie comes to your room Charlie: How are you doing, Dan? Dan: I'm doing good

Charlie's face Gives off a caring, tone Charlie: That's good But I have a date to get to. Dan: vaggie? Charlie: YEP! 😉😉Dan: well bye As Charlie leaves, Dan simply goes to sleep

End of day One next chapter: lil miss maid


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Sinner_Adam Sinner_Adam

not my best by any means if you guys could give me some constructive criticism on how to build the world out a little bit more I would love that

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