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love is unnerving(editing)
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i am editing this story if anyone interested please message me
I like Manu. but he didn't.
I like Tanu but I don't know about her feelings...
I am a shy and quiet girl
I am an active and happy guy.
I didn't talk much
I like sports and dance.
I like Madhu but I will get him
I like Sindhu but I am scared too about this like..
I have everything. without him, I am lacking everything
I have nothing in my life except me but I want something I don't know
I will get everyone attention except him
I like her but I can't be selfish
they are different in life but they lacked something. what it is?....do you want t know then read this story.....
you will get something interesting
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I like your story. But some what its staange words are there and i like to encourage you so you will get inspired. I red your story i want daily updates are weekly updates. Because i am searching when you will update
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I like sindhu character she is goodand manu i didn't get his character i want more.. I am thinking madhu will be different to manu.. When i studied the prologue i understand.
I am giving less rating but ots okay for me. I am waitting your upadte but i am not gettinh please give me regular upadtes and we will happy about that
I luked but slow pace and I have to give more updates from you and your work is good and I have to be in my power to the.... Request please understand me and ....do
I want you to speed up the story for us. We are waiting daily we are not getting updates. So please understand us. Please let us enjoy your story....
I have not like in me sindhu and madhu will have less romance compared to tanu and manu because they are silent these are violent i think... If you do anything to her she will leave
Good But i was very small.i am your friend so i gave full stars. If i start any story you have to give stars to me. And i am thinking you will definitely complete this story in this month. I already understand that keep going
Than you giving me reviews but i want more from you guys if i will get more than i will give more updated so please give comments and reviews..
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I read your story it is good to me. But i want regular updates i am irritated if i didn't get new uodate so please give me regular upadtes.