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In a moment of passion Storm and Thor create a child but they decided that this child was unwanted and abandoned the infant in a dimension that held beings across the multiverse that were killed and suppressed their powers.
The baby would either have to grow up fast to survive of die.
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i hope you dont drop this fanfic and keep going with it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hey Dudes I have write two other books that were received in different ways but I hope this time I can make you happy with this one. Also it has a very slow start.
bueno, la historia a nivel de trama supongo que no esta mal, aunque apenas y si esta empezando con los capitulos actuales ,por lo que no hay mucho que decir, sin embargo, hay algunos puntos a discutir. - la escritura no es mala, pero tal vez algunas redacciones podrian ser mejores o no se expresa muy correctamente, por supuesto, no soy hablante nativo de ingles, pero algunas cosas las veo extrañas comparadas a lo habitual. - aunque esta bien el desarrollo ya que marvel como multiverso tiene muchos mundos alternativos y en algunos, los personajes son malvados, sin embargo, el desarrollo de los eventos fue quizas demasiado rapido o falto de detalle por lo que de hecho da cierta sensacion de forzado. por cierto, la madre de thor gea? gea es griega? su madre no era frigga?
this fan-fic is very forced man the characters are very out of their mind Thor is cruel to his son and Thor wouldn't be like that with his son after what Odin did to him Storm are also portraying her as if she were rubbish summarizing this story is very forced