Lookism: The Foreigner [HIATUS]

LV 4

Peligro_Francis

please don't dropped it[img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad]

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Peligro_Francis

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LV 4

FleemusDesirus

As I'm writing this review, the story only has 6 chapters. The story is good, overall. There are some minor punctuation mistakes (such as the use of your and you're, etc.) but they don't affect your reading experience at all, so it's fine. Some of the characters act "out of character" but that's to be expected since this is an AU of Lookism. Finally, the fight scenes are great, no problems there. Currently a [4.8/5]~ I recommend you all to read it. I might update this review once this story has more chaps

LV 1

azeek_1013

good! please keep writing and don't stop, waiting for updates in the chapters, great book, the plot and grammar are on top, if only the update in the chapters would be faster

LV 3

Nicolas_Gallardo

good start jekskskakakakakajakakskskskskaksk

LV 10

LexOltre

Story development is good, but I hope they have slow story plot. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Did you drop it? 🥲 I realy you didn't cuz its a really fire fanfic no cap tbh 🙂 ill be waiting gor the next chapter I really hope you didn't tho 🫠🫠